I mean lets be honest with ourselves. Nobody writes and gives us such complete stories like Mister Immortal, our Gorilla Savior. Even having read the two preview chapter some weeks ago I know this is gonna be a fun journey.

haven’t even read one chapter but knowing the arthor u get 10/5 if i could give u it but i guess u get my stones and a 5/5 review.

It's finally out 😆😆 A 5 star review for this novel also, no need to hesitate after 3 awesome finished stories💪 Now all that's left is to wait for more chapters 🤤🤣

If you are not an American, you will feel annoyed by reading this novel. The hero takes advantage of every opportunity to increase America's power and show it as a country of peace, even though it is not, while other countries such as Japan, Germany and Russia appear as villains in the main. It is similar to Chinese novels, but it is an American version

Nice story bro... But I don't know why, I can never seem to read past the first dozens of your chapters in all your fics. After some pages, something in my mind just says 'enough' and then I can't seem to enjoy the rest of fic anymore. Is it just me? I feel it is just me. Anyway seem to be progress toward a dope future plot based on first couple of chapters.

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Let's start off with the positives. The grammar is excellent. The story is somewhat unique in a way, in that it doesn't follow the whole cannon timeline wholesale but has its own twist. Now, these are the areas I don't like. First, this story has a ton load of history, like a lot which I guess if you're into that it's fun but for me, it was boring why because he's already op and most of the interaction was him beating them up so I skipped most of it. Secondly, the story is biased toward the Americans which was slightly annoying. Third, why make a character so op but the villains he faces so nerf, either he kills them off-screen or they fight him with no sort of expertise. For example, the ancient one, are you telling someone whose master of the ancient arts is defeated so easily like she didn't even investigate his being an anomaly. please she should at least give him a run for his money. By no means is the story great, is ok at best to me. If you have nothing to read and wanna kill some time but it becomes a drag after a while.

Boringly done. People act like NPCs and don't notice anything. For example, how their old president does various tricks. ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I like it but it feels to force at times and there are factual errors that annoying but base research would fix it such as the us Air Force was founded on 18 of September 1947 before it was know as United States Army Air Forces and before that it was United States Army Air Corps so you know research a bit I mean I didn’t that the USAAC was a thing I always thought that it was just USAAF and it took me five seconds to find that out Again I like it but I think it could be better