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Tales_de_MiletoLv11yr
2023-05-04 14:46

So you are saying that the Mc , a 7 year old kid who lived only 2 year in ninja world , could fool Monkey god of shinobi (faking fear and portraying himself as a naive kid ).... I dont know about others but this 'acting like kid' thing is really putting me off ....

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DaoistsbzqfDLv1

Yeah right? And for some reason a control freak like Hiruzen, decided to just give in to MC's whims. Danzo apparently did not know MC's performance after the others top students graduated early. For someone who monitors all potential ninja in the village for his root, he could not see MC topping off the class later on?? This leads to MC being safe from Danzo? and then since he graduated and becomes older, Danzo just gave up because he would not be able to make him loyal???? Huh hello since when? My dude have weird tongue seal he can force on you???? I get you don't want to join root, but it could have been a better scenario that makes Danzo uninterested in MC

saintlotusLv2

If you watched Naruto ( or read the novel a bit further) you'll know Hiruzens' personality is big on The Will of Fire and to promote the Will of Fire he stated he'll reward the winners of the exams to motivate them to work harder before and even after the exams finish. Hiruzen thinking the kids would be naive didn't put a limit to his rewards and as we know the mc wasn't raised in the ninja world so he wasn't brainwashed with The Will of Fire mentality and was a former adult in his previous world, so he took advantage of this fact to ask for big rewards. MC acting like a kid wasn't for Hiruzen but for the other kids watching , the teachers watching and also other guests watching so Hiruzen couldn't refuse to reward him in front of everyone because that'd make all his talk about The Will of Fire look bad especially to the other kids who were still mentally young and the adults who believe in the Will of Fire ( tho we know it's bs but they all follow it like how Samurais' follow Samurai customs). So Hiruzen wasn't stupid he was just taken advantage off even tho he tried to downgrade the reward he could offer thinking the mc didn't know what he was talking about.

saintlotusLv2

Danzo tried to recruit him earlier but Hiruzen refused so Danzo backed off since he didn't think MC would reach. the same level as Kakashi or Itachi. Danzo was already planning to make a move on the Uchiha at this point so he didn't have time to worry about MC. MC also joined Anbu not long after being a Chunin so Danzo still couldn't make a move against him especially after losing most of root after Uchiha massacre.

DaoistsbzqfD:Yeah right? And for some reason a control freak like Hiruzen, decided to just give in to MC's whims. Danzo apparently did not know MC's performance after the others top students graduated early. For someone who monitors all potential ninja in the village for his root, he could not see MC topping off the class later on?? This leads to MC being safe from Danzo? and then since he graduated and becomes older, Danzo just gave up because he would not be able to make him loyal???? Huh hello since when? My dude have weird tongue seal he can force on you???? I get you don't want to join root, but it could have been a better scenario that makes Danzo uninterested in MC
SirBobthe_1stLv4

Believe it👍👍

bibeklamaLv13

saintlotus:Danzo tried to recruit him earlier but Hiruzen refused so Danzo backed off since he didn't think MC would reach. the same level as Kakashi or Itachi. Danzo was already planning to make a move on the Uchiha at this point so he didn't have time to worry about MC. MC also joined Anbu not long after being a Chunin so Danzo still couldn't make a move against him especially after losing most of root after Uchiha massacre.
Interesting_OkayLv1

Indeed

saintlotus:If you watched Naruto ( or read the novel a bit further) you'll know Hiruzens' personality is big on The Will of Fire and to promote the Will of Fire he stated he'll reward the winners of the exams to motivate them to work harder before and even after the exams finish. Hiruzen thinking the kids would be naive didn't put a limit to his rewards and as we know the mc wasn't raised in the ninja world so he wasn't brainwashed with The Will of Fire mentality and was a former adult in his previous world, so he took advantage of this fact to ask for big rewards. MC acting like a kid wasn't for Hiruzen but for the other kids watching , the teachers watching and also other guests watching so Hiruzen couldn't refuse to reward him in front of everyone because that'd make all his talk about The Will of Fire look bad especially to the other kids who were still mentally young and the adults who believe in the Will of Fire ( tho we know it's bs but they all follow it like how Samurais' follow Samurai customs). So Hiruzen wasn't stupid he was just taken advantage off even tho he tried to downgrade the reward he could offer thinking the mc didn't know what he was talking about.
Ichigo_Kurosaki_7370Lv4

Dude, if u can’t even handle this I can safely advice you to never try reading any fan fiction.

VartsLv14

Are you saying that there's no good Fanfic at all? Come on, the olden era of Fanfic is far better than now because of some folks who haven't read a good ff bloated a 6 (at best) by giving it a perfect score of 10. How in the world will that help the author to improve? Some tried to give it some critic (it's different than bashing) so the author will improve their craft but the folks I just said before, make the one who cares by giving their critic's to look like a buffon. Reading ff has and always been a gamble it's either a meh or a jackpot. After all the ff community come to be because they want something different to the story they love by making a character that suppose to be dead a salvation of sort and etcetera.

Ichigo_Kurosaki_7370:Dude, if u can’t even handle this I can safely advice you to never try reading any fan fiction.
Ichigo_Kurosaki_7370Lv4

If you can name a few of this great fanfics with more than 200 chapters, i would be greatful.

Varts:Are you saying that there's no good Fanfic at all? Come on, the olden era of Fanfic is far better than now because of some folks who haven't read a good ff bloated a 6 (at best) by giving it a perfect score of 10. How in the world will that help the author to improve? Some tried to give it some critic (it's different than bashing) so the author will improve their craft but the folks I just said before, make the one who cares by giving their critic's to look like a buffon. Reading ff has and always been a gamble it's either a meh or a jackpot. After all the ff community come to be because they want something different to the story they love by making a character that suppose to be dead a salvation of sort and etcetera.
LectorDivinoLv1

Unless Hiruzen knows about the reincarnation of the mc in some way 'acting like a child' works for him, even if Hiruzen sees that Fujin is more mature and clever than children his age, in the end he is still a child, thinks friend.

LectorDivinoLv1

They are people who do not see the plot of the novel in depth, you can think things by connecting things, the author avoids dumping information. If you want a novel where they explain everything because you can't intuit it, this isn't it. Of course, if you like the author having to explain everything to you, go read generic Chinese novels full of filler to reach 1.5k words.

saintlotus:Danzo tried to recruit him earlier but Hiruzen refused so Danzo backed off since he didn't think MC would reach. the same level as Kakashi or Itachi. Danzo was already planning to make a move on the Uchiha at this point so he didn't have time to worry about MC. MC also joined Anbu not long after being a Chunin so Danzo still couldn't make a move against him especially after losing most of root after Uchiha massacre.
The_Overthinker1Lv4

Who the hell will think that a 7 year old kid trying to act

yama_55vLv5

Why would he need to fake fear though?

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