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SpackRoxLv133yr
2021-05-10 17:23

At Chapter 23 This is a very good Naruto fanfiction. The writing quality is very good. The sentences are well structured and easy to understand and the grammar is also very good. The chapters are also quite long which is even better. The story is developing very well and is focused on the MC. There is almost no inconsistency in the story so far and the MC is developing at a very reasonable pace for someone having future knowledge of the Naruto world. So far there have been very few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC, with them being his Academy Sensei and the Third Hokage. This aspect is very good as I don't want to read more about characters other than the MC, other than their interaction with the MC and their perception of the MC and his actions. And while the story may feel somewhat slow to others, I enjoy reading about how the MC trains and plans for the future. This will lay a very good groundwork for future development of the story. The MC has a calm and rational personality and thoroughly plans his course of action, such as he follows a very well hashed out training plan. He is not OP from the start and does not have any cheats like a system or wishes from GOD or ROB, which makes this fic even better. There has been a lack of good naruto fanfictions such as this one which does not have any cheats and where the MC is also calm and rational without being an anti-hero or an outright villain. The MC is also not arrogant even though he has been at the top of his class for 2 years and though he is cautious to not gain any unwanted attention from Danzo, he doesn't portray himself as weak. So overall I am very satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters. I also hope that the author completes this fanfic. Kudos to the author.

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Devil_HexAuthor

Thanks

BigReader500Lv3

I quit reading because the author said no romance as I don't like eunuch mc but it is a quality novel otherwise.

ArcherArchXLv12

Any romance or harem?

Devil_Hex:Thanks
Devil_HexAuthor

None

ArcherArchX:Any romance or harem?
its_LLv3

he is only 13 what romance would you expect from a child and knowing that there are big villains like madara zetsu and kaguya out there and he had to face them in future how do you expect him to have time for romance and all

BigReader500:I quit reading because the author said no romance as I don't like eunuch mc but it is a quality novel otherwise.
machadogbcLv15

None for both or only harem?

Devil_Hex:None
its_LLv3

author san as one of your fellow readers who is reading this novel from the start I would like to make a suggestion that you should consider Romance it should not be heavy romance a little bit would do as our protagonist is transmigrated individual he doesn't have any real bond till now so having a partner can really make him the person of the ninja world having future knowledge he knows what he will face and his burden is immense so there should be someone who can atleast support him someone who can stand by him someone who brings warmth to him I know our mc is rational and cold but there need to be someone who can make him feel warmth make him feel that he is not just doing this all to survive but to also have a peaceful future with someone to have a family to have someone or something to protect. ita just my suggestion it still depends on your thinking and even if there won't be any sub Romance i still love your novel

Devil_Hex:None
Interesting_OkayLv1

A rational mind can't think of any Romance when there are hundreds of people that wants you dead in an instant. Also there are thousands of Naruto stories that have romance. So reading a fanfic that doesn't have any Romance is quite refreshing.

BigReader500:I quit reading because the author said no romance as I don't like eunuch mc but it is a quality novel otherwise.
Interesting_OkayLv1

Our MC is a transmigrated in the Naruto world that's why he doesn't have romance. If he find a civilian girl/kunoichi who is loyal to the village and became he's gf. If he ever told her about the future, she'll immediately tell the hokage. Anyway our MC doesn't have any time for romance. He needs to prepare for Madara and kaguya as soon as possible.

its_L:author san as one of your fellow readers who is reading this novel from the start I would like to make a suggestion that you should consider Romance it should not be heavy romance a little bit would do as our protagonist is transmigrated individual he doesn't have any real bond till now so having a partner can really make him the person of the ninja world having future knowledge he knows what he will face and his burden is immense so there should be someone who can atleast support him someone who can stand by him someone who brings warmth to him I know our mc is rational and cold but there need to be someone who can make him feel warmth make him feel that he is not just doing this all to survive but to also have a peaceful future with someone to have a family to have someone or something to protect. ita just my suggestion it still depends on your thinking and even if there won't be any sub Romance i still love your novel
its_LLv3

I never said that he should have a partner right now or something and why would he say that he is a transmigrated person to anyone and liking anyone of any village actually won't matter because they have to unite against madara in future so loyalty to village is really nothing to be concerned about and mc himself is trying his best to keep himself and the village safe so yeah.

Interesting_Okay:Our MC is a transmigrated in the Naruto world that's why he doesn't have romance. If he find a civilian girl/kunoichi who is loyal to the village and became he's gf. If he ever told her about the future, she'll immediately tell the hokage. Anyway our MC doesn't have any time for romance. He needs to prepare for Madara and kaguya as soon as possible.
Arthur_Leywin1Lv4

Try Naruto: Outsider’s Resolve if uou are open minded, it’s better than this but is very slow pacing and genuine potrayal of emotions with true charcacter development, if you want to see the naruto world in an eyes of a regular shinobi who knows only the basic structure of story cause he only read the manga and that too improperly with no harem and very very very slow romance, this is buffet served before you

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Serenity7SevenLv2

I read till chapter 127ish and in my opinion this is the best fanfic of naruto I've read so far. The MC has no cheats, but trains like there's no tomorrow and is cautious, which I think is another good point of this novel. It worth noting that he is an anti-hero type. He is no psychopath/sociopath/evil and he is also no saint/hero/happy-go-lucky type person(which in my opinion is very good, as I'm sick tired of reading about those.) This novel is for those that like or at least can manage training arcs. There is a lot of it, especially in the beginning when he is in the academy. Make no mistake though, the novel NEVER got boring! The training arcs were actually my favorite arcs so far. In fact, for me, the fact that the MC depends on himself for power-ups(at least as far as I have read) instead of seeking external sources of strenght(like a zero-tails, for example), or random lucky encounters, is something I enjoy very much. There is no sudden power-ups, or cheats. There is a little bit of comedy, especially in the interactions with Hiruzen, but just a little. This novel also explore the possibilities of wind style ninjutsus, beyond what the likes of temari, or even danzo, could ever hope to show in canon. Most importantly, at least as far as I could tell, there was no logical jumps anywhere. It's all very neat and creative, without making the reader feel alienated or flabbergasted in anyway. (Just the fact that there is no system granting him haki, or random space-type powers or whatever powers that do not fit at all in the universe is already fantastic to be honest...it's also why I started disliking fanfics with systems.) Oh and the pace so far is very good as well, at least for people like me that enjoy long stories with lots of adventures/training... though the adventure part happens later in the novel. Still, its awesome. It's a bit like a slice of life type novel, but faster and with a few time skips. I certainly enjoyed the pace very much. Btw, about stability of updates, I have no clue. I'm the type of reader that waits for hundreds of chapters to be released before I start reading a story. So yea. OH, and there was no romance in the novel so far. In summary, hopefully this novel will be 1k chapters long!

Interesting_OkayLv1

This fanfiction is a refreshing gem in the sea of isekai stories. The protagonist's journey into the Naruto world is a breath of fresh air as he navigates without the crutch of overpowered abilities. The author's commitment to realism shines through the protagonist's hard work and meticulous approach, adding a layer of believability often absent in similar tales. What truly sets this fanfic apart is the meticulous attention given to the Naruto world. Unlike other fics where the universe is a mere backdrop, here, every nuance is explored. The story doesn't revolve solely around the protagonist; it weaves seamlessly into the existing narrative, showcasing a deep respect for the source material. The absence of overpowered tropes is a welcome surprise. The protagonist's struggles and triumphs feel earned, creating a more engaging and relatable narrative. The injection of humor further elevates the story, offering moments of levity amid the challenges. Moreover, the author's incorporation of psychology, ranks, and politics adds layers of complexity, transforming the narrative into a well-rounded exploration of the Naruto world. This fanfic doesn't just retell a tale; it enriches and expands upon the established lore. In essence, this fanfiction stands out as a masterpiece, blending a well-crafted protagonist, a respectful treatment of the source material, and a narrative that seamlessly integrates humor, psychology, and political intrigue. It's a captivating journey that sets a high bar for fanfiction in the Naruto universe. I hope you read this masterpiece ;)

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