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2023-12-10 10:52

This fanfiction is a refreshing gem in the sea of isekai stories. The protagonist's journey into the Naruto world is a breath of fresh air as he navigates without the crutch of overpowered abilities. The author's commitment to realism shines through the protagonist's hard work and meticulous approach, adding a layer of believability often absent in similar tales. What truly sets this fanfic apart is the meticulous attention given to the Naruto world. Unlike other fics where the universe is a mere backdrop, here, every nuance is explored. The story doesn't revolve solely around the protagonist; it weaves seamlessly into the existing narrative, showcasing a deep respect for the source material. The absence of overpowered tropes is a welcome surprise. The protagonist's struggles and triumphs feel earned, creating a more engaging and relatable narrative. The injection of humor further elevates the story, offering moments of levity amid the challenges. Moreover, the author's incorporation of psychology, ranks, and politics adds layers of complexity, transforming the narrative into a well-rounded exploration of the Naruto world. This fanfic doesn't just retell a tale; it enriches and expands upon the established lore. In essence, this fanfiction stands out as a masterpiece, blending a well-crafted protagonist, a respectful treatment of the source material, and a narrative that seamlessly integrates humor, psychology, and political intrigue. It's a captivating journey that sets a high bar for fanfiction in the Naruto universe. I hope you read this masterpiece ;)

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Tyler_Henline_7485Lv4

is there romance

Interesting_OkayLv1

No

Tyler_Henline_7485:is there romance
Wicked_MonkeyLv1

The only thing i don't like about it is that the mc is cold hearted to a degree where its off the charts i like the other characters introduced more then the main character i understand that he's supposed to be smart and analytical but how does not letting anyone into your heart make you intelligent it makes you like madara and we all know how madara ended up. I hope the mc gets a reality check in later chapters or grows as a character.

Immensesenator4Lv12

That's the only off putting thing

Wicked_Monkey:The only thing i don't like about it is that the mc is cold hearted to a degree where its off the charts i like the other characters introduced more then the main character i understand that he's supposed to be smart and analytical but how does not letting anyone into your heart make you intelligent it makes you like madara and we all know how madara ended up. I hope the mc gets a reality check in later chapters or grows as a character.
Wicked_MonkeyLv1

yeah overall the story is fire and is enjoyable I'm just a bit salty after "her" death.

Immensesenator4:That's the only off putting thing
Interesting_OkayLv1

That is the reason why this fanfic is Unique. The MC isn't cold hearted he Just looks out for himself and only himself as he should be.

Wicked_Monkey:The only thing i don't like about it is that the mc is cold hearted to a degree where its off the charts i like the other characters introduced more then the main character i understand that he's supposed to be smart and analytical but how does not letting anyone into your heart make you intelligent it makes you like madara and we all know how madara ended up. I hope the mc gets a reality check in later chapters or grows as a character.
Camille_CorpinLv1

That's a life isn't worth living, living only for oneself...what would he be doing after he attained all o that strength and no emotional attachment, he'll be just a cold blooded killing machine that focus of self interest, no different from Danzo...

Interesting_Okay:That is the reason why this fanfic is Unique. The MC isn't cold hearted he Just looks out for himself and only himself as he should be.
Interesting_OkayLv1

Actually danzo would give he's life for the sake of the village. But not fujin. He will burn the village for the sake of himself. I've read many fanfics where the mc is very attached to the canon characters but this is the only fanfic where the mc is selfish and this is the reason why I love it.

Camille_Corpin:That's a life isn't worth living, living only for oneself...what would he be doing after he attained all o that strength and no emotional attachment, he'll be just a cold blooded killing machine that focus of self interest, no different from Danzo...
user123123Lv13

so some romance in the future or no romance at all?

Writing_is_hardLv13

On his Patreon the author did say he had some romance ideas/plans(as of now there is none). There might be some eventually but most likely it will play a small role imo

user123123:so some romance in the future or no romance at all?
Nob7Lv4

Wait really?, I actually have this fic on the back on my mind for a while like I wanted to read it but don't. is it worth it in you're opinion and is the MC really like lonely and without friends at all? or he got people to talk to? I don't want to read about a person who train and kill all day but I still like this type of fic. please answer when you can I'd appreciate it.

Writing_is_hard:On his Patreon the author did say he had some romance ideas/plans(as of now there is none). There might be some eventually but most likely it will play a small role imo
Zod_ExarionLv4

that's the good part of this fic that everything is in moderation (except romance). MC doesn't feel like a lonely character cause there is a good amount of interaction between other characters. You will find that MC has most interactions with his sensei, his friend with whom he was in the genin team and hiruzen(I bet you will love hiruzen and MC's interaction) So to answer your question, yes MC has people and friends to talk to and he does interact with them in adequate amount. But only 1 or 2 ppl are there whom MC considers close to his heart, but if has to make a choice between them and him, he would choose himself without giving much thought about(later though bro would be sad but that's all)

Nob7:Wait really?, I actually have this fic on the back on my mind for a while like I wanted to read it but don't. is it worth it in you're opinion and is the MC really like lonely and without friends at all? or he got people to talk to? I don't want to read about a person who train and kill all day but I still like this type of fic. please answer when you can I'd appreciate it.
Abayomi_AtoyegbeLv14

I took a break from this novel at almost chapter 200 and I'm ready to start a legendary binge and from vol 5 being called retired life I feel that mc is most likely at a level where he can relax a bit more outwardly but with surveillance throughout the shinobi so he knows what goes on and when, if your still reading this novel, how strong would you say the mc is at now and one of the title chapter ls I saw previously at ch 400 or lower makes me believe he is at least s rank by then so where would his strength be by now, can you say yes if he is at hashiramas level by now or no that he is close or hell no that he is at hiruzens.

Interesting_Okay:That is the reason why this fanfic is Unique. The MC isn't cold hearted he Just looks out for himself and only himself as he should be.
Interesting_OkayLv1

He's a kage level ninja, Right now. But nowhere near hashirama or madaras level.

Abayomi_Atoyegbe:I took a break from this novel at almost chapter 200 and I'm ready to start a legendary binge and from vol 5 being called retired life I feel that mc is most likely at a level where he can relax a bit more outwardly but with surveillance throughout the shinobi so he knows what goes on and when, if your still reading this novel, how strong would you say the mc is at now and one of the title chapter ls I saw previously at ch 400 or lower makes me believe he is at least s rank by then so where would his strength be by now, can you say yes if he is at hashiramas level by now or no that he is close or hell no that he is at hiruzens.
acetryLv4

he's stronger than minato for sure so upper mid level kage

Interesting_Okay:He's a kage level ninja, Right now. But nowhere near hashirama or madaras level.
Writing_is_hardLv13

Yeah I think it is definitely worth it. The story definitely focus’ on him, the Mac never feels lonely there is maybe one or two times where I think he realizes that he doesn’t have many friends. he however has many interactions (they tend to be humorous in nature) with hiruzen. He has one very good friend from the academy that he doesn’t communicate much with but is later brought back more into the story. He is a mentor to Naruto as well although he usually uses Naruto to prank hiruzen and Kakashi for fun. I think this is a very good Naruto fan fiction. I haven’t looked through many (cuz I think most of pretty bad) but it has consistent updates and clearly ahead of the pack writing for this platform. author is the best Patreon I’ve paid for but nearly the whole book is free anyways so no need to. Either way if you’re looking for Naruto fanfics I think this one is definitely worth committing some time to

Nob7:Wait really?, I actually have this fic on the back on my mind for a while like I wanted to read it but don't. is it worth it in you're opinion and is the MC really like lonely and without friends at all? or he got people to talk to? I don't want to read about a person who train and kill all day but I still like this type of fic. please answer when you can I'd appreciate it.
Arthur_Leywin1Lv4

Try Naruto: Outsider’s Resolve if uou are open minded, it’s better than this but is very slow pacing and genuine potrayal of emotions with true charcacter development, if you want to see the naruto world in an eyes of a regular shinobi who knows only the basic structure of story cause he only read the manga and that too improperly with no harem and very very very slow romance, this is buffet served before you

Interesting_OkayLv1

Interesting, Thank you for the suggestion 😊

Arthur_Leywin1:Try Naruto: Outsider’s Resolve if uou are open minded, it’s better than this but is very slow pacing and genuine potrayal of emotions with true charcacter development, if you want to see the naruto world in an eyes of a regular shinobi who knows only the basic structure of story cause he only read the manga and that too improperly with no harem and very very very slow romance, this is buffet served before you
Daoistcvc5ImLv2

I would say that they are 2 main characters with different scenarios, my problem with the Mc, from Outsider is that he does stupid things despite how intelligent he can be, and also his recklessness, and I think it is because he also has that thing about the ring, and the drug dealing, simply those two aspects are what kept me away from the novel, but once I get over that it has a good rhythm and appeal, I would say that he is a more close and relatable main character, but that is also because he is weak and that compared to Fujin he has had almost no time and resources to get stronger. Outsider's strong points are the small touch and the urban air, Wind Camality is more spectacular, big and detailed since we follow a main character, and important characters in a deeper way and much more interesting world building things. Although in interactions the one I like the most is Fujin, since his cheeky personality gives play, to be on par with the rest of the characters as well as his strength, Takumo due to his position is not much in the grand scheme of things, despite the fact that his existence already made a great important change, while in Fujin currently things are moving, and Fujin is now more proactive. Also say that Wind Calamity has twice as many Chapters, and the fights are quite better than those of Outsider. Due to the confrontations that can give play.

Arthur_Leywin1:Try Naruto: Outsider’s Resolve if uou are open minded, it’s better than this but is very slow pacing and genuine potrayal of emotions with true charcacter development, if you want to see the naruto world in an eyes of a regular shinobi who knows only the basic structure of story cause he only read the manga and that too improperly with no harem and very very very slow romance, this is buffet served before you
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Serenity7SevenLv2

I read till chapter 127ish and in my opinion this is the best fanfic of naruto I've read so far. The MC has no cheats, but trains like there's no tomorrow and is cautious, which I think is another good point of this novel. It worth noting that he is an anti-hero type. He is no psychopath/sociopath/evil and he is also no saint/hero/happy-go-lucky type person(which in my opinion is very good, as I'm sick tired of reading about those.) This novel is for those that like or at least can manage training arcs. There is a lot of it, especially in the beginning when he is in the academy. Make no mistake though, the novel NEVER got boring! The training arcs were actually my favorite arcs so far. In fact, for me, the fact that the MC depends on himself for power-ups(at least as far as I have read) instead of seeking external sources of strenght(like a zero-tails, for example), or random lucky encounters, is something I enjoy very much. There is no sudden power-ups, or cheats. There is a little bit of comedy, especially in the interactions with Hiruzen, but just a little. This novel also explore the possibilities of wind style ninjutsus, beyond what the likes of temari, or even danzo, could ever hope to show in canon. Most importantly, at least as far as I could tell, there was no logical jumps anywhere. It's all very neat and creative, without making the reader feel alienated or flabbergasted in anyway. (Just the fact that there is no system granting him haki, or random space-type powers or whatever powers that do not fit at all in the universe is already fantastic to be honest...it's also why I started disliking fanfics with systems.) Oh and the pace so far is very good as well, at least for people like me that enjoy long stories with lots of adventures/training... though the adventure part happens later in the novel. Still, its awesome. It's a bit like a slice of life type novel, but faster and with a few time skips. I certainly enjoyed the pace very much. Btw, about stability of updates, I have no clue. I'm the type of reader that waits for hundreds of chapters to be released before I start reading a story. So yea. OH, and there was no romance in the novel so far. In summary, hopefully this novel will be 1k chapters long!

SpackRoxLv13

At Chapter 23 This is a very good Naruto fanfiction. The writing quality is very good. The sentences are well structured and easy to understand and the grammar is also very good. The chapters are also quite long which is even better. The story is developing very well and is focused on the MC. There is almost no inconsistency in the story so far and the MC is developing at a very reasonable pace for someone having future knowledge of the Naruto world. So far there have been very few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC, with them being his Academy Sensei and the Third Hokage. This aspect is very good as I don't want to read more about characters other than the MC, other than their interaction with the MC and their perception of the MC and his actions. And while the story may feel somewhat slow to others, I enjoy reading about how the MC trains and plans for the future. This will lay a very good groundwork for future development of the story. The MC has a calm and rational personality and thoroughly plans his course of action, such as he follows a very well hashed out training plan. He is not OP from the start and does not have any cheats like a system or wishes from GOD or ROB, which makes this fic even better. There has been a lack of good naruto fanfictions such as this one which does not have any cheats and where the MC is also calm and rational without being an anti-hero or an outright villain. The MC is also not arrogant even though he has been at the top of his class for 2 years and though he is cautious to not gain any unwanted attention from Danzo, he doesn't portray himself as weak. So overall I am very satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters. I also hope that the author completes this fanfic. Kudos to the author.

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