SirBobthe_1st

Great sounds amazing I’ll be with you all the way

K I think this is it for me I’m dropping it’s too rushed in multiple ways we need a time skip because he’s still 6 like 🥀

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Is this a harem or does the Mc stop being a perv

Author if you read this dude you please just increase the work count by like 100 words pls

This is good and original if there’s one thing I need is more chapters and a shorter arc this arc rn is very iffy sure it adds new stuff to the world but I can’t lie we need a large time skip in the next 100 chapters

Ok so first off and this is interesting idea and has great potential and creativity. And here comes the but, but it’s a shitty ass novel good translation but the original work is just garbage for 3 reasons 1. It’s fucking as hell racist honestly what can you expect from a chinse man reincarnated into a German immigrant in the USA but even that it’s just plain retarded how bias the author is to China. 2. It’s character design/world logic is trash every character is flat and dull conversations is so simple. the author tries to keep tot he lore when he adds random shit like Disney it’s like he read that one German ww1 novel I think it’s called blood and iron idk but that’s the vibes I’m getting from it but a really shitty version. 3. It’s plot it’s so fucking slow not to mention the author is such a hypocrite with everything he says. In the end I can see where this is going and I like some of it but there are factors that just are repulsive for me to read a good story. And honestly I can take some racism it’s in every chinse fic or novel but at some point this just gets to a point of like wtf is happening it’s like it’s getting written but a chinse Pakistani Jews Japan like I’m not saying there good in anyway but wow. This is bad.

Give me a extra chapter please and thanks

Good idea and concept and the writing is pretty good from what you expect for a fanfic. Updating is top notch and the background is pretty interesting. My only huge problem with this is age, like man or women idk who reading this idc if there’s harem or romance but, you want to know how old they are if there all the same age as Harry Potter, 11 so sexualizing characters at that age is just wrong and messed go watch the 1st movie and just look. Oh and last thing author seems to repeat frazes and that kinda gets old

I have a question I see the harem tag I don’t usually like harem and but since this is in the Hxh I feel like there aren’t that many options so I want to read this can someone explain why this has harem and to what degree