i am disappointed to be honest , but yh here we go : - as of right now updates seems ok -decent writing quality could use some improvements but good enough to be considered GOOD in webnovel . - nothing much to say about WB as it is a fancfic except some major/minor things like there being quite a few senju clan members in the village and some new wind jutsu i guess idk if there's more as i stopped reading pretty early in the genin arc or either i dont temember atm. - Now CD and SD , its terrible imo , like mc is a paranoid , cowardly , robotlike mf , i couldnt relate to nor could i get my self to like him no matter how i tried , let me give you an example , he is above average and i trying to not show his above average abilities as not to get danzo attention … like mate you are an orphane civilian with above average skills , nobody cares about yooh also he is stupid to think he could deceive experienceed NINJAs with his little acts , but do you know whats worst ? It actually bloody works on even the hokage supposedly the best shinobi there , like this is ridiculous to the highest degree . i just couldnt get my self to read past this nonsense , but if you dont mind any of this stated above then you would probably enjoy the fiction , yikes i guess really liked the story idea huh cant believe i spent a whole day reading , was so frustrated i hit the gym before writting this comment 💀💀
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LIKEOh thats nice to know , didn’t read that far then, from where i stopped it just felt like alot of plot holes , but still there is his horrendous personality that is enough to keep me from going back to reading this
dustdweller:umm we get to know that the hokage pretty much knows 90% of his antics, but kind of develops a close relationship with him.
What chapter did you stop? He gets "better" after 250-300ish chapters.
Random_exe:Oh thats nice to know , didn’t read that far then, from where i stopped it just felt like alot of plot holes , but still there is his horrendous personality that is enough to keep me from going back to reading this
Ppl who write hate comments because of his personality never had to work for something in real life and are kids do you really think you should waste time and not do something make yourself powerful enough to survive especially that u have been reborn and have no cheats you are just a no named orphan so if you die nobody cares and if you become a shinobi you would die if you are only a jounin or below s rank bcz of third shinobi war . It is not as easy as it looks to become strong naruto did not become strong just by dancing and passing his times behind the scenes in the naruto world he worked for his base strength and upped his mental fortitude to fight against kirana and use his chakra So fuujin with no cheats had to work insanely hard to achieve the power he has now in the web novel The naruto was not fully displayed and the depths of each and every moment was lost in the theme of naruto Actually the author is ingenious for coming up with this and provides a logical and better version of naruto with less potholes
Thanks for your feedback. I can tell this fanfiction has influenced you on a very deep emotional lvl. So, good for you. I myself am not really interested enough to go back and reread the story just to refute your points whether they are about the ff or they about my personal life.
Aliop:Ppl who write hate comments because of his personality never had to work for something in real life and are kids do you really think you should waste time and not do something make yourself powerful enough to survive especially that u have been reborn and have no cheats you are just a no named orphan so if you die nobody cares and if you become a shinobi you would die if you are only a jounin or below s rank bcz of third shinobi war . It is not as easy as it looks to become strong naruto did not become strong just by dancing and passing his times behind the scenes in the naruto world he worked for his base strength and upped his mental fortitude to fight against kirana and use his chakra So fuujin with no cheats had to work insanely hard to achieve the power he has now in the web novel The naruto was not fully displayed and the depths of each and every moment was lost in the theme of naruto Actually the author is ingenious for coming up with this and provides a logical and better version of naruto with less potholes
Its actually really good, especially his interaction with the canon characters. Out of the 5 naruto fanfiction novel I have read, I'd rate this at the top 1. The other 4 didn't have this level of smart schemer mc, and greatly mirrors the personality of the other canon characters, and dont forget about how epicly written the fight scenes are.
Random_exe:Thanks for your feedback. I can tell this fanfiction has influenced you on a very deep emotional lvl. So, good for you. I myself am not really interested enough to go back and reread the story just to refute your points whether they are about the ff or they about my personal life.