EroFan

the author definitely did not read enough about OP. lol

THIS IS FULL OF BS

right, the author is just making up BS, he clearly has no knowledge for the story other than knowing a bit of its plot following luffy but not more than that.

so many made up BS in this fanfic

yep, definitely from here

yeah, so why would it be there? it makes no sense

the author is clearly making up BS to fit his fanfic

man, the fact that he wanted to become a pirate the moment he realizes he is in one piece is already a flag. i mean, technically, one piece world doesn't consist of only pirates and marines, so why d fack would he want to become a pirate which is technically a criminal? That's just stupid. if he only wanted to go to the final island, he could just become an adventurer or an explorer. there are so many things to become in one piece that is unexplored in the story since the story is focused on luffys adventure as a pirate.

damn, I never knew iw as so imaginative, it looked hot in my head

wouldn't it have been more better if MC just wokeup in a new world rather than having to speak with this angel and have all these cringe conversation??