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Osborn123
Osborn123Lv13yr
2021-07-22 02:45

This story is a complete dissappointment. It started really good, with a diferent aproach from other stories and an interesting mc. The mc is a reincarnated person with a cheat ability that lets him master his spells faster. We also learn that he had an interesting time at Hogwarts while studying, as he had to defeat the whole of Slithering while there. At this point I was thinking, well, this character seems to be proactive and have some backbone. Man, was mistaken! Soon I discovered that I was pretty much the opposite... As the story starts and one reads some chapters, some things start to become clear. The story follows canon events but for some reason the author doesn't want this mc to interfere with them, and does something that should not be done. He totally nerfs the mc and turns him into a complete incompetent whenever such events take place, so that he doesn't change anything. The future knowledge that he has as a reincarnator doesn't seem to work well with the author's plans and therefore such knowledge dissapears and the mc doesn't remember even the most obvious of the events in canon. Therefore we often see him stumbling around wrong assumptions all the time... Then something worse happens and suddenly the mc no longer has any drive to do anything, or any objective, or any mission/plan/etc. Nope. He gets relegated to a secondary role in the story whose only purpose is to help a little bit the golden trio, and nothing more. And from this point onwards he started to appear less and less in the story, and the golden trio started to appear more and more. Specially Hermione. There are many chapters that are entirely from her POV. In the end I can no longer say that the mc of this story is Felix, as the author turned him into someone completely useless and does nothing important in the story. But most of all, because Hermione and the golden trio appear a lot more in the story than Felix himself! As for plot advancement there is almost none. Many chapters are filled with irrelevant information that serves no purpose. Other chapters are simply flashbacks of the begining of the story that simply repeat what has already been said. Simply put, there are a lot of useless chapters that can be ignored completely.

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Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
Crazy_DarkSide_CatAuthor

Mc didn't read HP book or watched Hp Film, he only watched some famous clips from internet in his previous life.( so he only knows some basic Hp gossips and some scenes)[img=recommend]

FastestOfAllSperm
FastestOfAllSpermLv2

Man...... That guy didn't know much about HP universe and probably only know the outline of the plot so him not interfering much to preserve the plot that he knows is kinda smart. Even if it is just an outline of the plot, future knowledge is future knowledge.

1Dreamer_Owl
1Dreamer_OwlLv4

also the mc is almost not interested in the plot of hp only uses it to maintain the line (something to be guided by) and history since in theory the only thing that interests mc are the magic and knowledge of ancient magic

BrabbitX
BrabbitXLv5

Ty for saving my time.

VermaWyrda
VermaWyrdaLv15

even if he only this amount of knowledge HE SHOULD BE AWARE OF THE BOOK BEING A HORCRUX TO VOLDEMORT...... ITS THE ENTIRE PREMISE OF MOVIE 2 NOT TO MENTION ITS THE ENTIRE POINT OF MOVIE 7 AND THE HUNT THEY HAVE FOR IT, you can not in good conscious say that he doesnt know of it and another fact is that if he has such limited knowledge HOW does he KNOW about all the people then..... HE SHOULDNT KNOW OF THEM EITHER im dropping this

Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Mc didn't read HP book or watched Hp Film, he only watched some famous clips from internet in his previous life.( so he only knows some basic Hp gossips and some scenes)[img=recommend]
KRMN
KRMNLv4

Your loss probably best HP Fanfic

VermaWyrda:even if he only this amount of knowledge HE SHOULD BE AWARE OF THE BOOK BEING A HORCRUX TO VOLDEMORT...... ITS THE ENTIRE PREMISE OF MOVIE 2 NOT TO MENTION ITS THE ENTIRE POINT OF MOVIE 7 AND THE HUNT THEY HAVE FOR IT, you can not in good conscious say that he doesnt know of it and another fact is that if he has such limited knowledge HOW does he KNOW about all the people then..... HE SHOULDNT KNOW OF THEM EITHER im dropping this
yamachy
yamachyLv13

NGL I really like this fanfic.

KRMN:Your loss probably best HP Fanfic
TheAncientOnell
TheAncientOnellLv6

An mc without actually influencing the story is useless why should we read something we already know m not gonna lie this a huge deal breaker m not reading this thanks for the save....

Barnacleboy
BarnacleboyLv15

Isnt this a translation???

Felixxx
FelixxxLv3

Man thanks for the save lol, if I wanted to read Harry Potter again I'd read the book rather than waste time on this if the canon doesn't really change. And if u want a harry potter fic, try searching for something about a Harry Potter that survived the apocalypse that Voldemort brought by launching nukes in his world, and after finally finding Voldemort in the middle of a ritual he kills him; and in the process of doing that he gets transported in the beaches of Malibu and then later gets to know an agent named Phil Coulson.

Rage41
Rage41Lv4

Thx soldier! your sacrifice will be remembered![img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

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KRMN:Your loss probably best HP Fanfic
Wood_Duck
Wood_DuckLv4

I didn't know that until I just read this, though my opinion on this probably doesn't matter considering I've never seen a single Harry Potter movie or read any of the books about it, my knowledge about Harry Potter stuff being limited to the few chapters of some random fanfics that I've read which more often than not were probably complete AU's and therefore providing me with close to no actual knowledge on the series itself, though honestly they might have just completely copied the originals plot and I'd of had no clue either way, so any information I have about the Harry Potter series is either heavily changed or just plain wrong.

VermaWyrda:even if he only this amount of knowledge HE SHOULD BE AWARE OF THE BOOK BEING A HORCRUX TO VOLDEMORT...... ITS THE ENTIRE PREMISE OF MOVIE 2 NOT TO MENTION ITS THE ENTIRE POINT OF MOVIE 7 AND THE HUNT THEY HAVE FOR IT, you can not in good conscious say that he doesnt know of it and another fact is that if he has such limited knowledge HOW does he KNOW about all the people then..... HE SHOULDNT KNOW OF THEM EITHER im dropping this
stay_at_home_pig
stay_at_home_pigLv2

Then why say he is reincarnated? Just Say he is a special charactwr, anyway I havent read it yet

Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Mc didn't read HP book or watched Hp Film, he only watched some famous clips from internet in his previous life.( so he only knows some basic Hp gossips and some scenes)[img=recommend]
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

Stupi d

Crazy_DarkSide_Cat:Mc didn't read HP book or watched Hp Film, he only watched some famous clips from internet in his previous life.( so he only knows some basic Hp gossips and some scenes)[img=recommend]
qwertypous_046
qwertypous_046Lv4

so overall this story is one of those stories who just add another side chatacter but barely change on the plot at all, just pure cannon. Thanks for the save

Henry_Morgan_2728
Henry_Morgan_2728Lv1

This fiction is one of the most original fanfics out there, think you need to read more than a couple of chapters mate to get a handle on this story.

Ballad
BalladLv5

I'm hesitant CN novels are 90% always trash with the last 10% actually being good

ratuzin
ratuzinLv5

10%? you are a very positive person... I would go 1% because CN has a lot of racism and heavy nationalism... even the ones that don't have it are dropped because readers complain a lot about not being nationalist...

Ballad:I'm hesitant CN novels are 90% always trash with the last 10% actually being good
Ballad
BalladLv5

I was trying to be positive and nice lol

ratuzin:10%? you are a very positive person... I would go 1% because CN has a lot of racism and heavy nationalism... even the ones that don't have it are dropped because readers complain a lot about not being nationalist...
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