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Quem_Matou_Owen
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2021-10-16 23:45

This story is full of criticism from people used to fan-fic without much "story" and complexity, after all this fan-fic addresses magic and information from the book and "others" as faithfully as possible, changing events and plot in a subtle way and logic, without that nonsense MC super Op that does everything on its own. The other characters are suited to their stories and talents, and what I find most interesting is the way the author brings changes to the story without having to write an entire chapter just chronicling the MC's achievements. You can find this out by reading how the characters treat him or think about him. (The author changes the point of view of some characters, which in my opinion only makes the story more complete and real) [google translator]

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