BrabbitX

90% of my comments are frustrations because this site is 95% trash 5% good stuff. There are so many more novels that are bad that I can't be bothered to leave a negative comment on them. Use a better AI, there is no way this has been through a decent AI. If the word count after AI is way less, try to give it more guiding, tell it not to cut so many words etc, experiment. English is not your first language? Who could have guessed it, neither is it mine, but that's besides the point. If you want real people to enjoy it you need to use AI or a proper editor. I have used an AI to improve reading quality of another novel, it worked GREAT, except sometimes it cut sentences, which I had to compare and ask it not to cut them etc.

pathetic.

too bad they don't care about what u care. god, this thing is almost forcing me to drop this. c mon, move on from this most unrealistic character to ever exist. How can one act like this infront of ultimate tyrants... if he acted like that in front of any random baron he would be castrated and worse, but ... AAAAAAAAAA fk u author.

this kid, is the most unrealistic character I have ever seen in any fanfic. I have read about such braindead characters who make no sense, but this1? it's the worst. unreal. fkn lame.

retarded. braindead. moronic. beyond help. Imagine acting like that in front of royalty... how did he live to this day? Shouldn't he have the minimal street smarts? utterly disgusting plot progression.

I'm really not sure what Eldeel was sm0k1ng when he wrote that the writing quality is good. I'm desperate for a good yuri, but the writing quality is abysmal. I can't read it, i can't even manage to finish the first chapter. It's so utterly bad and wrong. Almost ever sentence sounds weird, commas in wrong places. Wrong adjectives etc etc. Like it's so bad it's unreadable for me. AND I DID WANT TO READ IT. Let me know if u run this through an AI or smth, i swear any AI could atleast make this readable, just gotta check for cut content.

slave system. bye.

Sorry, i tried to read this, but it's just too stupid. The characters are way too stupid for me to enjoy reading this. The whole world is stupid and MC is average at best. How can ppl read this slop.

mc got reincarnated by truck-kun and u still have a problem with sebastian? ur crazy homie.