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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv13yr
2021-09-30 10:16

The simple flapping of a butterfly's wings in Brazil can cause a tornado in Texas”, horrible story, BASICALLY 100 CHAPTERS of the book/film plot, mc remembers everyone's names, but DOESN'T REMEMBER THAT THE DIARY IS A HORCRUX, the mc has become a secondary character who becomes useless when he is needed or when "he wants to interfere with the plot". just that he existed in that world could literally have made some events not happen. basically waste and time

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Quem_Matou_Owen
Quem_Matou_OwenLv2

O MC não "lembra" do nome dos personagens,afinal o único motivo dele saber é porque ele é um professor. Mas essa história não é pra você, a única diferença dessa história para as outras é sua complexidade e ponto de vista.

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

and you explain the lack of creation in depth??... just the fact that he exists there changes everything (the fact that he teaches something useful, would make the characters think when doing something stupid). and if he's watched famous clips, why doesn't he remember the troll in the bathroom?, why doesn't he remember who voldemort is (a very famous clip is the secret chamber where we learned his identity) why doesn't he know about the curse in voldemort's name (it's something much talked about both in forums, as disclosed in many clips)... bedtime story of an uncreative author

Quem_Matou_Owen:O MC não "lembra" do nome dos personagens,afinal o único motivo dele saber é porque ele é um professor. Mas essa história não é pra você, a única diferença dessa história para as outras é sua complexidade e ponto de vista.
Quem_Matou_Owen
Quem_Matou_OwenLv2

Em nenhum momento existiu alguma regra em que o protagonista deve memorizar todos os livros de Harry Potter, se você procurar uma história onde o MC domina tudo com informações totalmente memorizadas do livro, então esse não é a história certa pra você. 1°- diferente da outras histórias esse literalmente aborda a magia e personalidade dos personagens de forma fiel, você não encontra profundidade por causa do realismo. 2°- ele nem tava na escola. 3°- e? Agora tudo é todos devem saber o quê é Harry Potter e toda a sua história? Você sabe que a maioria das pessoas só assiste um filme ou dois, certo?

Carlos_Balbizan:and you explain the lack of creation in depth??... just the fact that he exists there changes everything (the fact that he teaches something useful, would make the characters think when doing something stupid). and if he's watched famous clips, why doesn't he remember the troll in the bathroom?, why doesn't he remember who voldemort is (a very famous clip is the secret chamber where we learned his identity) why doesn't he know about the curse in voldemort's name (it's something much talked about both in forums, as disclosed in many clips)... bedtime story of an uncreative author
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

at no point did I say that he has to remember everything, forgetting one thing or another is normal. but he is not aware of occlumency??? he should remember the most famous parts as you said yourself (you said he remembered watching the famous videos) but he doesn't even remember voldemort's real name?. and did i ever say he must remember everything? no... so don't say nonsense out there

Quem_Matou_Owen:Em nenhum momento existiu alguma regra em que o protagonista deve memorizar todos os livros de Harry Potter, se você procurar uma história onde o MC domina tudo com informações totalmente memorizadas do livro, então esse não é a história certa pra você. 1°- diferente da outras histórias esse literalmente aborda a magia e personalidade dos personagens de forma fiel, você não encontra profundidade por causa do realismo. 2°- ele nem tava na escola. 3°- e? Agora tudo é todos devem saber o quê é Harry Potter e toda a sua história? Você sabe que a maioria das pessoas só assiste um filme ou dois, certo?
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

and most people in the case, many of them watched more than just 1 or 2 movies, because it was a movie that was started in an era with almost non-existence of cell phones as we see today. or are you referring to children ("majority")?

Quem_Matou_Owen:Em nenhum momento existiu alguma regra em que o protagonista deve memorizar todos os livros de Harry Potter, se você procurar uma história onde o MC domina tudo com informações totalmente memorizadas do livro, então esse não é a história certa pra você. 1°- diferente da outras histórias esse literalmente aborda a magia e personalidade dos personagens de forma fiel, você não encontra profundidade por causa do realismo. 2°- ele nem tava na escola. 3°- e? Agora tudo é todos devem saber o quê é Harry Potter e toda a sua história? Você sabe que a maioria das pessoas só assiste um filme ou dois, certo?
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

and by the way, occlumency after a certain level is practically a photographic memory/hypertimesia

Quem_Matou_Owen:Em nenhum momento existiu alguma regra em que o protagonista deve memorizar todos os livros de Harry Potter, se você procurar uma história onde o MC domina tudo com informações totalmente memorizadas do livro, então esse não é a história certa pra você. 1°- diferente da outras histórias esse literalmente aborda a magia e personalidade dos personagens de forma fiel, você não encontra profundidade por causa do realismo. 2°- ele nem tava na escola. 3°- e? Agora tudo é todos devem saber o quê é Harry Potter e toda a sua história? Você sabe que a maioria das pessoas só assiste um filme ou dois, certo?
Quem_Matou_Owen
Quem_Matou_OwenLv2

Ele simplesmente nunca leu os livros/filmes, existe um limite de quantas informações você consegue com alguns vídeos. Você situou fóruns, mas como alguém que nunca assistiu os filmes iria participar? (Qual o problema do MC ser alguém menos informado?)

Carlos_Balbizan: and by the way, occlumency after a certain level is practically a photographic memory/hypertimesia
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

for God's sake, I sited the forum as an example... since you don't want the mc to interfere with the main thing, just say he only knows the existence of books and movies or have you heard of them... but you want to force that he's already seen some clips, but it's time and he doesn't remember anything (ps: just edit)

Quem_Matou_Owen:Ele simplesmente nunca leu os livros/filmes, existe um limite de quantas informações você consegue com alguns vídeos. Você situou fóruns, mas como alguém que nunca assistiu os filmes iria participar? (Qual o problema do MC ser alguém menos informado?)
Bob_Uchiha_XD
Bob_Uchiha_XDLv4

🙄 MC is pathetic. End.

Quem_Matou_Owen:Ele simplesmente nunca leu os livros/filmes, existe um limite de quantas informações você consegue com alguns vídeos. Você situou fóruns, mas como alguém que nunca assistiu os filmes iria participar? (Qual o problema do MC ser alguém menos informado?)
Quem_Matou_Owen
Quem_Matou_OwenLv2

Se você não leu os livros que eu gosto logo posso te chamar de patético, certo?

Bob_Uchiha_XD:🙄 MC is pathetic. End.
Lord_Bell
Lord_BellLv14

You're pathetic. You probably have a micro PP

Bob_Uchiha_XD:🙄 MC is pathetic. End.
Daniil_Rebrov
Daniil_RebrovLv1

Just so insulting?

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

yes... the story is really bad

Daniil_Rebrov:Just so insulting?
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

And what does that have to do with this review? I just criticized the author saying that the protagonist saw some of the most famous clips and didn't even mention them or use any form of butterfly effect

Quem_Matou_Owen:Se você não leu os livros que eu gosto logo posso te chamar de patético, certo?
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

you call me pathetic with such maturity? really?

Lord_Bell:You're pathetic. You probably have a micro PP
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

I probably exaggerated the review, but at least I passed my feeling of hatred towards the fact that nothing changes just to keep the canon even though everything is "different"

Daniil_Rebrov:Just so insulting?
Lord_Bell
Lord_BellLv14

Carlos_Balbizan:you call me pathetic with such maturity? really?
Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

I really don't know why I still answer people like you...but again, really? I congratulate you

Lord_Bell:
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Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1

true... I replied through the notifications, and it looks like he referred to me

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