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LifeGivesYouLemons
LifeGivesYouLemonsLv43yr
2021-02-25 21:39

Translation of this novel is terrible. Simple terms like “cultivator” is instead translated as “fairy”. Don’t even get me started on the cultivation techniques the MC finds. There are also other inconsistencies which makes you sometimes have to reread a sentence. Some sentences even look like machine translation. All of these small details result in a crappy reading experience. All in all it shows that 0 proof reading was done or that the translator might not be that experienced. While I would like to give kudos for what the translator has done to make the story understandable I’m more frustrated as this has happened on a lot of novels, so obviously it is either an easy mistake to make or it’s always the same translator. No change will be made as no translator reads these comments. Story seemed like a good time waster if you can deal with the translation.

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Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters. Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km) After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change. Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met. Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know. Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read) SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!) Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way) Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities) World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained) P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify. It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants. Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do? It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions. Have a nice day everyone!

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