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Hawk9970
Hawk9970Lv154yr
2021-02-06 18:23

Mtl trnslation, dont let couple chapter deceive you it keeps getting worse noticeably if I may add... Just can't believe that Webnovel allowed to such thing to happen... Good story but it got ****ed beyond reason with mtl translation...

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Caylvanyth
CaylvanythLv15

I can vouch for this review. I just read it and most of it seem MTL translations. They are replacing Immortals/Cultivator for "Fairies"

MikeN
MikeNLv14

Why are you reviewing the MTL and not this translation? This review doesn't seem like it's from a person that actually read any of this novel on this site. I'm at chapter 110 and nothing like what is predicted here has happened. And the cliché plot line even twisted to something different and new in the last few chapters. The story, writing and translation are getting better, not worse.

DragonBoatTrans
DragonBoatTransTranslator

Do read the latest chapters we have made some amendments :)

Caylvanyth:I can vouch for this review. I just read it and most of it seem MTL translations. They are replacing Immortals/Cultivator for "Fairies"
Akabane
AkabaneLv6

Its nice that some amendments have been made in the later chapters but what is preventing people to actually reading those chapters is that they are stopping at the beginning that doesn't look so well.

DragonBoatTrans:Do read the latest chapters we have made some amendments :)
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv14

Will you edit the earlier chapters? I kinda want to read this, but if i have to read/pay 50+ mtl chaps... Its kinda not motivating.

DragonBoatTrans:Do read the latest chapters we have made some amendments :)
Max255
Max255Lv6

Have you edited the previous chapters? All those have 'fairy' or ' fairies' in between. Kinda disappointing.

DragonBoatTrans:Do read the latest chapters we have made some amendments :)
Max255
Max255Lv6

There's no point in making changes in later chapters of they don't fix the previous chapters. Who will come to read if they see all mistakes in those chapters?

Akabane:Its nice that some amendments have been made in the later chapters but what is preventing people to actually reading those chapters is that they are stopping at the beginning that doesn't look so well.
Filip_Filip
Filip_FilipLv2

I am interested in applying for a job, is there another way to contact you?

DragonBoatTrans:Do read the latest chapters we have made some amendments :)
birbed
birbedLv4

Because in the later chapters, its literally MTL. You can try reading them but its literally unreadable

MikeN:Why are you reviewing the MTL and not this translation? This review doesn't seem like it's from a person that actually read any of this novel on this site. I'm at chapter 110 and nothing like what is predicted here has happened. And the cliché plot line even twisted to something different and new in the last few chapters. The story, writing and translation are getting better, not worse.
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Usagi_mofu
Usagi_mofuLv11

Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters. Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km) After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change. Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met. Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know. Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read) SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!) Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way) Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities) World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained) P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify. It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants. Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do? It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions. Have a nice day everyone!

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