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InHisName
InHisNameLv63yr
2021-02-08 11:15

The MC has as much personality as stale bread. The typical filial shtick with the annoying mentality of 'returning a droplet of kindness with a waterfall'. This MC has no individuality, nothing to distinguish him from the 100,000 other MCs with the exact same personality. If that wasn't enough the translation quality is terrible. The quality noticeably drops every 5 chapters. For instance, some words are directly translated into English without considering the context. This is why this novel calls cultivators as 'fairies'. Obviously rushed! Honestly, I have no clue how this rubbish was picked. The story is awful, character design is bland, and the translation quality is reminiscent of machine translation.

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LibrarianOfDragons
LibrarianOfDragonsLv4

No this is all wrong bro

InHisName
InHisNameLv6

You must be a new reader to Eastern novels.

LibrarianOfDragons:No this is all wrong bro
Arav_Shah
Arav_ShahLv13

It actually improved later on, everything about the story and I feel it was done in a decent manner and is extremely entertaining.

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Usagi_mofu
Usagi_mofuLv11

Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters. Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km) After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change. Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met. Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know. Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read) SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!) Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way) Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities) World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained) P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify. It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants. Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do? It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions. Have a nice day everyone!

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