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IntrovertedLv104yr
2021-01-08 20:48

it is better than some, worse than others; the translation is better than a raw machine translation. the use of the word fairy instead of immortal is kind of annoying i guess

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SOD
SODLv3

In most chinese novels, the world 'fairy' is used more often than 'immortals' especially in xianxia themed novels so actually the translation might be pretty accurate just that it might be unacceptable in different cultures because in western countries fairy is often equated with tiny magical beings lol or beautiful women.

CarbonizedDiamond
CarbonizedDiamondLv3

there was a strong fairy in Stephen Chow's KUNGFU HUSTLE recommend you watch it

SOD:In most chinese novels, the world 'fairy' is used more often than 'immortals' especially in xianxia themed novels so actually the translation might be pretty accurate just that it might be unacceptable in different cultures because in western countries fairy is often equated with tiny magical beings lol or beautiful women.
MyriadDestiny
MyriadDestinyLv4

haven't read it, but depends on the original text. 仙女 = female immortal; immortal fairy 仙 = immortal.

God_Of_Lazinesss
God_Of_LazinesssLv2

So you are tell male immortals to just go die. Just tell in which culture does males are called fairys unless it their race which is western fantasy in Eastern fantasy female immortal are called fairy. Like fairly [name] just it is in western fantasy we have goddess

SOD:In most chinese novels, the world 'fairy' is used more often than 'immortals' especially in xianxia themed novels so actually the translation might be pretty accurate just that it might be unacceptable in different cultures because in western countries fairy is often equated with tiny magical beings lol or beautiful women.
MikeN
MikeNLv14

Or feminine looking Trap guys that like to cross-dress and prefer seducing other guys.

God_Of_Lazinesss:So you are tell male immortals to just go die. Just tell in which culture does males are called fairys unless it their race which is western fantasy in Eastern fantasy female immortal are called fairy. Like fairly [name] just it is in western fantasy we have goddess
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