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TheDolphinLv134yr
2021-01-08 07:26

My biggest worry is the MC just being a system slave. Also not very original P.S: First FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller

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TheAncientOnellLv6

Sht system reliant Mc's sck the bug one huge one

Hnn17Lv6

Where was mc when I was trying to track a parcel from Russia ?

Avian_GamerLv11

I think its pretty original. The "system" isn't like other systems that I've read in other webnovels. It only allows the MC to locate something and this early on it isn't that far away so it isn't like it's OP.

Venerable_LinfengLv11

I think it’s the system that can track everything, not the mc himself haha.

Soggy_WafflesLv2

xp

MikeNLv14

He can use it in combat against foes he wouldn't normally be able to sense. But it isn't a Passive Sense, so he's still vulnerable to surprises and ambushes if he isn't asking the right tracking questions constantly.

Avian_Gamer:I think its pretty original. The "system" isn't like other systems that I've read in other webnovels. It only allows the MC to locate something and this early on it isn't that far away so it isn't like it's OP.
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Usagi_mofuLv11

Welp, no more FPs for me :(, anyway, you guys have to do with a summary/review of the novel of 36 chapters. Mc reincarnated, gains a tracking system that can track everything without a limit within 10 meters and if he accomplishes certain milestones and achievements he can upgrade the range or he gains one-time use extended tracking range (for example: track within 10 km) After mc eats a fruit that grants perfect body for cultivation he brokethrough to the first level and his 'action' took a turn as he acted like a refined person... Weird but okay, at least his personality didn't change. Personality wise, a filial son who still remembers his parents after gaining cultivation. Of course he dumped them somewhere safe with some good friends he made to start his journey of cultivation with his 'good brother' he met. Ah yes, in this novel the mc is OP compared to mortals for anyone wanting to know. Translation Quality: 5* (It's nice to read) SoU: 5* (Always, trial read - Qidian, son of bitches, bring back the 60 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!) Story Development: 4* (I mean, it's going a good way) Character Design: 4* (Yes, filial, not retarded, cautious and side characters have a nice solid personalities) World Background: 3* (Yeah, not that much information, only the name of cities and their destinations. About cultivators is not much explained) P.S And, I saw someone saying that the mc is a slave to the system. Some might be disgusted by such a thing and won't read this novel so let's clarify. It's a tracking system, it's a system without many rules. The system DOESN'T give any quests nor any restrictions. The mc does whatever he wants. Ok, there is also an another side to slave of the system and that is that some mcs relies too much on the system and that is true, but it happens in every novel and put your self in their shoes. A tracking system, is it something not to rely on? What can you do? It's not like there is any rules of the system you can exploit as THERE ISN'T any restrictions. Have a nice day everyone!

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