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KasiCair
KasiCairAuthor4yr
2020-09-09 05:21

Okay, I deleted some reviews because I really did not appreciate the exaggerations. Now, I will not remove any review due to a low rating or hate poured at me. But saying that: Narcissa was raped by half of the wizarding world... now that got you the delete. It is YOU who are making her into a whore when she was more of a girl born in the wrong family and had some unfortunate circumstances in her life. I am making a background for a determined, strong woman character. Someone who went through hell but managed to keep her mind intact. Capable and cunning yet incredibly ruthless. Now your complains: In school. She slept with boys. And relished when Malfoy, her future husband saw her. The rape... well, you make it seem as if this story was about raping women but... what the hell? She was among Death Eaters as a not-so-willing participant. What do you think would happen to her? I wanted to portray a strong reason for her to hate them. Yes, I did distort the facts. This is fanfic so deal with it. --- If you want to write a review about how you hate what happened in the 26 chapter. Do so. Certainly. Just do not exaggerate the facts so horrendously even I, who really didn't delete even one review until now, no matter how low and reproaching it was, get twitchy.

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Leloch_vi_britania
Leloch_vi_britaniaLv2

1523/5000 If you were to do something like this, you shouldn't have changed anything. Just let her be the arrogant noble that we all know from books. I understand that you wanted to change something, after all, it is a Fanfic, but that is just disgusting, if it were just her husband it would be acceptable, and we would have a reason to hate Malfoy's father. But being raped by half the wizarding world? ... That's just disgusting ... I know she wasn’t raped by half the wizarding world, I just put it like that so I don’t list everything you’ve put as her background story. Another thing that was disgusting, is that she served Voldemort with her broken Sister. She was clearly raped along with her sister by Voldemort .... and she said it was amazing ... This is disgusting friend ... I don't know how you can write this and continue, I know you wanted to give Nacisa a tragic past, but this is just forcing the plot. I know you wanted to change, I know this is a fanfic, but .... Sigh. I don't know, just do what you want, I give up. This fanfic was incredible until this chapter, I honestly missed the hype of reading your fanfic. It was like I expected a very tasty pizza, but someone had thrown shit on it, that's just disappointing. Probably, you will lose many readers because of this, after all, there are few people who like this type of story, but probably, you don't mind, right? ......... You managed to destroy the image of Nacisa that I had from the books of J.K. Rollings

LordRhyolith
LordRhyolithLv12

Well, to be honest, Death Eaters ARE psychopaths, and them letting their wives be raped by their 'comrades' isn't really surprising. One just needs to remember that Fenrir Greyback likes to rape and eat little children (if he isn't turning them to werewolves). He isn't a Death Eater, but still constantly around them.

Culture_Lover
Culture_LoverLv12

Hahahahaha the most stupid excuse I've read

lonesomeReader
lonesomeReaderLv14

like actually, I get it's your book but the extremes you put weren't needed at all, honestly it's probably yourself your projecting Into the book if you want to admit it or not, disgusting

lok_98
lok_98Lv4

There are many ways to make a strong character but what you have done here is really disgusting.forced loveless abusive marriage and abusive childhood is a enough tragic past what u have done here is just too much.you wanted to project a strong character but I think more than half of the readers hate how her character was portrayed now. Many won't able to read this at this point u know. Just don't do this in ur other stories now that u know the results.Or if you gonna do this just put rape and gangbang or tragic past tags at the book.so people like us can avoid this type of fics. Anyway GL with this fic. On side I like ur other fics.keepit up.dont make same mistake againπŸ‘

Flavia15
Flavia15Lv15

What image are you talking about the books gave so little about her and the movies didn't do any better. In wiki details are given but not a lots about her childhood or her activity during the war most of it's speculation and even her time in hogwarts said only about her meeting malfoy and the future Death eater. I'd say what the author did put more depth into her life even it's part of her dark history.

Leloch_vi_britania: 1523/5000 If you were to do something like this, you shouldn't have changed anything. Just let her be the arrogant noble that we all know from books. I understand that you wanted to change something, after all, it is a Fanfic, but that is just disgusting, if it were just her husband it would be acceptable, and we would have a reason to hate Malfoy's father. But being raped by half the wizarding world? ... That's just disgusting ... I know she wasn’t raped by half the wizarding world, I just put it like that so I don’t list everything you’ve put as her background story. Another thing that was disgusting, is that she served Voldemort with her broken Sister. She was clearly raped along with her sister by Voldemort .... and she said it was amazing ... This is disgusting friend ... I don't know how you can write this and continue, I know you wanted to give Nacisa a tragic past, but this is just forcing the plot. I know you wanted to change, I know this is a fanfic, but .... Sigh. I don't know, just do what you want, I give up. This fanfic was incredible until this chapter, I honestly missed the hype of reading your fanfic. It was like I expected a very tasty pizza, but someone had thrown shit on it, that's just disappointing. Probably, you will lose many readers because of this, after all, there are few people who like this type of story, but probably, you don't mind, right? ......... You managed to destroy the image of Nacisa that I had from the books of J.K. Rollings
Flavia15
Flavia15Lv15

let me fix this, she didn't become important enough until near the ending books and movies to include her.

Flavia15:What image are you talking about the books gave so little about her and the movies didn't do any better. In wiki details are given but not a lots about her childhood or her activity during the war most of it's speculation and even her time in hogwarts said only about her meeting malfoy and the future Death eater. I'd say what the author did put more depth into her life even it's part of her dark history.
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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

Bro...ur bash of the wizarding society despite [ ur explanations- which is good, cause no one has really done this in a bash. Good job] BUT its too much...u;ve made them out to be a bunch of retards. ----------- -Mole skin pouches having no detection charms when being stolen. ****, wouldnt the pouches be useless? pick pocketing would be the new thing. they had charms that made impossible for anyone other than owner to open it, obviously they;d have detection charms or something -him stealing said pouches in a crowded area and no one noticing? not even fking voldy? come on man,,,,fine, fine, voldy was weak, extremely so, I'll accept, but he was the dark lord, the most powerful too....he should've noticed something. And what about the others? -The the magic cupboards being useless and only the ordered ones being worth it? [dude, if this was the case....wouldnt they be out of business? no normie could buy it since its expensive, and they wouldnt buy as its practically useless] -The old lady being distracted by feeding cats, and forgetting to tell dumbles about the dursleys being arrested? really? That was retarded, [And u want say that she didnt notice harrys abuse...dude the dursleys werent retard....they didnt physically abuse to the point of broken bones, if they did the schools would've caught em, and seeing how much they liked their image, they wouldnt have done it. Also harry was fed, he wasnt like a sick kid, in the bk was described as a scrawny kid. Plus no where in the bk is physical abuse [broken bones] mentioned..emotional yes....BUT , yes petunia did hit harry with a frying pan, their physical abuse was hitting, not broken bones. Plus the BLOOD CHARM, protects person against what the caster [ie: lily] wants...which is voldy....it dosnt heal **** or anything like...it just make the person undetectable voldy and also protects harry from voldy, like in the first movie...actually researched this ] -Also, say u made this blood charm OC.....if dumbles had this, wouldnt he also have something to detect if harry left? he would've searched right? or the old lady would;ve told later -The cloths? oh come on man....they werent that retarded [muggle air repellent?] ---------------------- I will still read on considering this is a better bash fic that most if not all I;ve read, but still to much..u've made em retards

Z3RG102077
Z3RG102077Lv6

Sorry but you blew it from chapter 21, this is not good for me, it was fun while it lasted goodbye :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

anOrdinary
anOrdinaryLv5

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