LonesomeReader

honestly, still have a bunch of work done on paper, just really haven't had the time(or motivation)to write. my job put out mandatory Overtime and its been such a drain. Haven't really read or wrote sense then. I dont wanna promise any for sure dates on when I would start writing again. sorry bud

yeah, sorry but I dont have the answer at the moment. I got a general outline of the chapter and some of it wrote down, but some IRL problems came up that I gotta take care of. with 12 hour work shifts and my car giving me problems atm, I generally feel to drained or unmotivated to write that day. Apologies

no worries, I have 7 sisters big Dawg, and only 3 brothers

I wont spoil what they did notice just yet, but some of what you mentioned is relevant. though I will mention something about the smell if you'd like?(minor spoilers)

thanks for the review bud, slow story's aren't for everyone. i will mention theres absolutely no ai(besides the photo generator for OG characters), one person did recommend Grammeraly for fixing the punctuation, but when I saw the monthly charges I didnt even consider it. this is a passion project so there was never gonna be a chance of me paying to help do this. so 100% my writing and proof reading.

oooooof

nope, normal human level. you may be right, where no matter what, his sight should always at the very least be at a higher level, good thing this is a work of fiction. Im writing this as he is well within his mean to control/limit himself to a 'normal' human.

yeah, when his pops asks "your eyes okay now?"(or it was something along those lines) it was a slight hint about his heat vision.

that's what I was thinking as well, generally speaking going day by day was never gonna be a thing. I just know how sometimes people look forward to certain interactions and thought about covering a few. also yeah, Mc can think as quick as a super computer. it just Mc thinks everyone around him is just a average normal people so he tends to keep it relatively normal, same with covering his ears and nose with bio-energy(as seen as a child in a previous chap). as listening/smelling everything miles around isnt pretty cool tbh. funny that you mentioned it though, no spoilers but next chapter we will see some of his abilities.

yes sir. I posted a new Aux chapter that has a few characters in it. Just Mc, a few Original characters, and some can on characters that will look differently.