Culture_Lover

He will soon be killed

The protagonist of Boss in School is strong, but if you compare him to other stories, he is a bit average. He just looks at the degree of destruction of fights on Lookism or Manager Kim, they are a completely different world.

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Nope, he's an OC

Bro, it's rare to find a Halo fanfic on this page, and even rarer is that you've reached 50 chapters and you won't abandon it. As a fan of the franchise I give you 5 stars. Now, as for criticism, I would recommend that you do not write large paragraphs, perhaps 3-4 lines at most, because it is tiring to the eye. The story, although it is somewhat new, is quite lost in the idea of ​​mixing a world like that of Halo with a fantasy theme of powers like in Strar Wars, so I don't know if many will like it. As a recommendation, I would say that you continue writing until you can finish your fanfic, this will help you perfect your narrative.

Spiritual jade milk... of course

You know, in Chinese novels everything is very big (I think it's a complex)

Yep, I hate those things too. Happily there will be none of that nonsense in this fanfic. Robert will be able to kill any protagonist without problems, as he already did with the old man from Take a Peek.