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KuroHyoudouLv54yr
2020-09-10 01:19

I was enjoying the book at the start but from chapter 26 I dropped this. Hopefully I didn't give any power stones to this fanfic. Anyways Peace and 140 words.

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Acsmaster007Lv4

then you are a utter idiot.....such an amazing story.....real idiot [img=fp]

KuroHyoudouLv5

sure whatever you say buddy

Acsmaster007:then you are a utter idiot.....such an amazing story.....real idiot [img=fp]
Rela_XLv12

Yo, stfu you stupid b*tch

Acsmaster007:then you are a utter idiot.....such an amazing story.....real idiot [img=fp]
KuroHyoudouLv5

I really don't get the author. he had a good story but then had to ruin it with that disgusting sh*t. Does he think that it makes a story better

ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Hey uh buddy you do realize people are entitled to wether or not tgey like a book, right?

Rela_X:Yo, stfu you stupid b*tch
lonesomeReaderLv14

yeah bro that chapter....I ain't reading this book man

LilxSwayneLv14

Why did you drop it, before I start it

KuroHyoudouLv5

what?

LilxSwayne:Why did you drop it, before I start it
RiokunaiLv13

can you explain why you dropped it?

DogeLuvReadinLv13

In chapter 26 it basically portrays Nacrissa as a *** slave for all of voldymort followers and it also portrays lucius as a gay man who rapes his wife. It also starts off with nacrissa sleeping around in hogwarts with many men and even groups of men to spite her Marriage Contract.

Riokunai:can you explain why you dropped it?
1PrimoLv14

Bro, why didn't you just say ***?

DogeLuvReadin:In chapter 26 it basically portrays Nacrissa as a *** slave for all of voldymort followers and it also portrays lucius as a gay man who rapes his wife. It also starts off with nacrissa sleeping around in hogwarts with many men and even groups of men to spite her Marriage Contract.
DogeLuvReadinLv13

Say what?

1Primo:Bro, why didn't you just say ***?
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1PrimoLv14

s.e. x I've already figured out that it was blocked

DogeLuvReadin:Say what?
DogeLuvReadinLv13

I was just explaining that chapter to that guy

1Primo:s.e. x I've already figured out that it was blocked
1PrimoLv14

Understood. I just didn't understand why you wouldn't say se. x slave. I didn't expect that the filters on the website would block something so trivial.

DogeLuvReadin:I was just explaining that chapter to that guy
KuroHyoudouLv5

chapter 26

Riokunai:can you explain why you dropped it?
The_GrindelwaldLv5

"Such an amazing story", good humor buddy

Acsmaster007:then you are a utter idiot.....such an amazing story.....real idiot [img=fp]
KnightShade420Lv13

Although I am in the camp of people who hated what happened to Narcissa I got over it and the rest of the story is worth getting over Narcissa’s situation. I am one of the people who hate any kind of rape and most stories that have a rape tag I generally skip but the author had a ton of potential and we shouldnt be discouraging the author.

Rela_XLv12

Uhh, I don't really give two f*cks abt ur opinion b*tch

ThanatosGreekGod:Hey uh buddy you do realize people are entitled to wether or not tgey like a book, right?
ThanatosGreekGodLv14

Then why do you think we would care about your opinion on that dudes opinion? Seriously your opinion was/is completely useless and dosent help at all as a review and just states your a trash human being who probably plays call of duty screaming at 8 year olds for being better than you

Rela_X:Uhh, I don't really give two f*cks abt ur opinion b*tch
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amaturewriterLv4

Bro...ur bash of the wizarding society despite [ ur explanations- which is good, cause no one has really done this in a bash. Good job] BUT its too much...u;ve made them out to be a bunch of retards. ----------- -Mole skin pouches having no detection charms when being stolen. ****, wouldnt the pouches be useless? pick pocketing would be the new thing. they had charms that made impossible for anyone other than owner to open it, obviously they;d have detection charms or something -him stealing said pouches in a crowded area and no one noticing? not even fking voldy? come on man,,,,fine, fine, voldy was weak, extremely so, I'll accept, but he was the dark lord, the most powerful too....he should've noticed something. And what about the others? -The the magic cupboards being useless and only the ordered ones being worth it? [dude, if this was the case....wouldnt they be out of business? no normie could buy it since its expensive, and they wouldnt buy as its practically useless] -The old lady being distracted by feeding cats, and forgetting to tell dumbles about the dursleys being arrested? really? That was retarded, [And u want say that she didnt notice harrys abuse...dude the dursleys werent retard....they didnt physically abuse to the point of broken bones, if they did the schools would've caught em, and seeing how much they liked their image, they wouldnt have done it. Also harry was fed, he wasnt like a sick kid, in the bk was described as a scrawny kid. Plus no where in the bk is physical abuse [broken bones] mentioned..emotional yes....BUT , yes petunia did hit harry with a frying pan, their physical abuse was hitting, not broken bones. Plus the BLOOD CHARM, protects person against what the caster [ie: lily] wants...which is voldy....it dosnt heal **** or anything like...it just make the person undetectable voldy and also protects harry from voldy, like in the first movie...actually researched this ] -Also, say u made this blood charm OC.....if dumbles had this, wouldnt he also have something to detect if harry left? he would've searched right? or the old lady would;ve told later -The cloths? oh come on man....they werent that retarded [muggle air repellent?] ---------------------- I will still read on considering this is a better bash fic that most if not all I;ve read, but still to much..u've made em retards

Z3RG102077Lv6

Sorry but you blew it from chapter 21, this is not good for me, it was fun while it lasted goodbye :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(

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