its decent but not a stort for me. the first 3 chapters is pretty much i dont give a ****, its fully unnecessary because he's gonna die anyway and live a new life so whats the point of telling his former life story? it could be done by 1 chapter but noo the author did multiples. .
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Because all you want is the OP'ness. The conquest on doing bad ass scenes right? Completely unnecessary? Really? Lol, why don't you ask other authors about that? One chapter and be done? What, is this your book that I should do what you just said? I already said that if you don't like it, then drop it! Stop complaining cause your reading all of this for free.
heh at what part of my review did i mention about liking to read OP MC or my preference for a fanfic story? your just assuming things, also i can fucking read any fanfics all i want and Who the hell give you the rights to say who's allowed to read a fucking DC fanfic? did the authors of DC give you this permission? you hypocrite your just also using DC work for your fanfic for FREE and also highly ILLEGAL. you call yourself an author and yet you cant accept a small bad review. i even give you 4 star so that it wont affect your ratings that much and yet here your are being salty.
also i already said the story is not for me so its fucking that i drop it already.
How the hell did you reach that conclusion? I'm talking about me creating the tragic backstory and I asked you on why don't you try asking other authors on why they also do a detailed backstory? Cause your saying that the backstory was useless cause he would die anyways. How the hell did you reach to the conclusion that I am claiming DC? My book was listed on the Fanfiction section and I never said I claimed it. Lol
And did I specified that you should not read a DC fanfic? I said, that if you don't like MY book, then good. Drop it.
Lmao which part did i say your claiming DC? all im saying is that who give you the rights to who's allowed to read your dc story but saying RIGHTS that doesn't mean im saying your claiming dc, when i said rights im implying that the authors of dc give you permission to write a fanfic of their work its also give you the power who's allowed to read your story. Also your the one here who is salty about me complaining your story that im READING FOR FREE. Thats right, its a FANFIC so anyone can Read or Complain your story even if you dont want it. A piece if advice, you want to be an author? then dont be salty to anyone who would complain about your story, its a normal thing that you would get a complain in your story, instead reply to those people possitively, answer there complains without giving all too much information or spoilers. Dont go and attacking people personally.
man i already drop this story ages ago, thats why i specifically write in my review that the story is not for me.
thiw fanwriter is just a salty mofo
Maybe the past can be add as flashback later on on the story if author want to add reason on why the mc did that and the easiest reson is the past
Why are you getting so triggered. Tbh I like the idea of revenge that was presented in the first three chapters. He actually has a reason to get strong, not like one of thise wish fulfilments. Good story Author i appreciate the hard work.
i dont see anything in my review that suggest i got 'triggered'. If were talking about triggered then its the author you should be saying that, I clearly just posting my review in my personal opinion with a fair rating that wont affect the story much and if you havent noticed yet it was the author that replied then attack me with assumptions of my taste of literature, then has the guts of saying that i was only reading the story for 'free'. anyway enough of that just read the replies on my review,i really dont care anymore.
Disgusting.
How so?
"What, is this your book that I should do what you just said? I already said that if you don't like it, then drop it! Stop complaining cause your reading all of this for free." - Author's reply to a reviewer offering constructive criticism. The reviewer even left 4 stars.
For a sec I thought you were cursing me lol
Hahaha. I guess I did have a reason to, seeing as you were asking about a 6 months old comment. But no, it's just an honest reply.
Lol
