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Scholar_Assassin
Scholar_AssassinLv54yr
2020-08-11 01:14

Just give it a try atleast for 5 chaps..... If you know me then you should know that I rarely review. So just give it a try. I can see the different points of view and I think this fanfic deserves a chance and therefore I am gonna read it till end or until I don't like it..... I will let you know if I drop it...

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TrueImmortalDevil
TrueImmortalDevilLv6

i mean ... the first 5 chapters are basically all about dumb shiet other the the wishes chapter ... but even that got 50% bs ...

Ballad
BalladLv5

Is he a wannabe justice Hero or is he original and actually do whatever he wants cause I doubt someone with such a Garbage life from what I read in reviews would ever be a hero cause like it would be horrible if he was let me know if he's a hero I prob won't touch

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eccentricbeing18
eccentricbeing18Lv4

Yeah, dunno about you but I read novels to entertain myself, not to depress myself with self centered people who can't even notice his mom has a sickness. There a lot of glaringly obvious signs hays... And dude, are you a masochist or something?? Emo?? Seriously?? Is this what's entertaining to you? Cause I don't know if anyone noticed but his overly shitty background was not even necessary in the story. Then he wasted his wishes on stupid wishes that looks cool but has a lot of limitations. He happily made them but he could've wished that he is born in a peaceful universe where no god could take control of anything. Or that his mother's next life after her current one would still be his mother or his daughter. He could've wished reality bending powers but he ****ed up by wishing almost of it into his body. sunpower for his body (powerful, yes but anyone could easily fuxk you up because they could easily just suck your soul) eye powers for his eyes zenkai boost for his body immortality tied to his body (cause ban almost died when his soul was sucked out of him in nanatsu) the system was the only useful thing. he could've wished for his ex happiness. he could've wished for the god's son death. he could've wished that no god could interfere with any mortal again. Fuxk!! even the gift about no one could control him or anything was even sketchy, if he could grant you something he could easily take it as well. and why the fuxk would he believe that god's metaphorical son was the one who did it, for all we know, he was the one who did it. fuxking naive self centered pussy! Lastly, he could've wished for god to fix his past into a happy and peaceful one. overcomplicated unnecessary backstory that is full og plotholes hays... this just depressing and annoying. I've dreadfully read 5 chapters but the story is ruined by plotholes, the mc is pathetically self centered, even the wishes are a big waste. ugh.. .hays... masochists would love your novel

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