Okay, so I gave a review on this a few months ago and it was pretty harsh. And terribly scarse on detail. And I honestly kept to what I thought until I read, unknowingly, the authors second book, "Sunshine in Fairy Tail?" and really liked it. And when I realized that they were the same author, I still thought that the start was a bit to drawn out and that the conversation between the mc and the rob was to long and full of exposition NTR, so that's still a big reason to skip. But if you do what I did, which is forget everything before the DC transition actually starts and just read the wishes, the story isn't actually as bad as its beginning. Writing quality wise, there really needs to be smaller paragraphs as some of them drag on really long. Story developmen: The start was obviously not well received. The first few chapters are basically the prologue while everything after moves rather quickly. This is definitely the story's weakest point. Character design: Meh, pretty good. Not very edgy or soft, not brain dead but not written like the authors trying to show off by saying the mc did something ridiculous through pure intelligence. World Background: Its DC, just look it up. So that's my revised review. Rating as a story? 3.5 stars. Rating as a story written by a brand new author? 4 stars.
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LIKEIn the end, I hope the author continues both stories as both are good. With "Sunshine in Fairy Tail?" being great in my opinion.
Thanks, this is still in the process of getting rewritten along with the other book btw. But kindly check out my two fics in my second account, namely. "The Merc With A Mouth In DC" and "Reincarnated in DC as Hippolyta's Son" I'm on a break now and was too busy with work so I haven't updated those books for weeks. But it was not dropped, so if you have time and had ran out of more books to read, kindly check out the books I recommended above.
malachi_Pharr:In the end, I hope the author continues both stories as both are good. With "Sunshine in Fairy Tail?" being great in my opinion.
