I deleted some stupid reviews except for those other bad reviews that were related to the book. Well just read it if you want, this has a tragic backstory, yes. But it's not like I'm obsessed to tragic stories that I would make more tragic things in the long run. I'm not the type to shy away on writing things that could help shape the mentality and personality of the MC. Yes, I could just make him cool in the first place, but there is no meaning to it. What, you want the MC to be cool on his previous life then live happily ever after in one of the most cruelest Universes? This is DC fanfic for god's sake. I do not like tragic and stuff and it was just the backstory that was tragic and you guys were all whining about not being able to read it because of that. Then don't, I am not begging you to read it. So just shut up cause you are reading this for free.
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I know that, I know you also warned but what the main problem is that the M.C doesn't get to redo his mistakes. Getting along with his GF and getting his mother back would have made the story GENUINELY GOOD That stupid Rules By GOD Of not allowing to be with mother and girlfriend ruins it, I mean immortality is OK But that is not Ok is kinda unreasonable. Well sry for my ranting , I know I m in wrong but still couldn't stop myself from writing this.
your backstory really suck -.- and its basically half the story so far ... wasting alot of time on something that wont really matter at all later in the story ...
Who said the MC won't be able to meet his mother and GF again? I'm just going to stop here cause I don't want to spoil.
Paper_plane:I know that, I know you also warned but what the main problem is that the M.C doesn't get to redo his mistakes. Getting along with his GF and getting his mother back would have made the story GENUINELY GOOD That stupid Rules By GOD Of not allowing to be with mother and girlfriend ruins it, I mean immortality is OK But that is not Ok is kinda unreasonable. Well sry for my ranting , I know I m in wrong but still couldn't stop myself from writing this.
Tell me a reason why it doesn't matter later in the story. Cause you look so sure that it was useless, so let me hear your reason then.
TrueImmortalDevil:your backstory really suck -.- and its basically half the story so far ... wasting alot of time on something that wont really matter at all later in the story ...
cause almost all backstory stop mattering after the actual story star -.- especially in these kinds of stories. Also the only thing this kind of backstory really shows is that you are sick in the head.
FanfictionLover:Tell me a reason why it doesn't matter later in the story. Cause you look so sure that it was useless, so let me hear your reason then.
if you delete reviews not related to the book do so with all of theim and not just the ones giving you bad stars
should remove 10 of the 5 star review for being unrelated to the story ... just saying
Stop mattering? Sick in the head? What, are you the author that you are sure the back story wouldn't matter in the long run? Sick in the head? That just means your too immature to understand things. What, you expect ths creators of those bloody gore horror movies to be psychos or something? Are you 13? 15? Years old? Cause your reasoning sucks. Really.
TrueImmortalDevil:cause almost all backstory stop mattering after the actual story star -.- especially in these kinds of stories. Also the only thing this kind of backstory really shows is that you are sick in the head.
Atleast I am not mentally ill like a certain dumbass.
FanfictionLover:Stop mattering? Sick in the head? What, are you the author that you are sure the back story wouldn't matter in the long run? Sick in the head? That just means your too immature to understand things. What, you expect ths creators of those bloody gore horror movies to be psychos or something? Are you 13? 15? Years old? Cause your reasoning sucks. Really.
Look, other then you seeming abit sick in the head and angry whenever someone has an opinion different from your own, you are a somewhat decent writer. Just stop acting like a Karen.
FanfictionLover:Stop mattering? Sick in the head? What, are you the author that you are sure the back story wouldn't matter in the long run? Sick in the head? That just means your too immature to understand things. What, you expect ths creators of those bloody gore horror movies to be psychos or something? Are you 13? 15? Years old? Cause your reasoning sucks. Really.
Dude why would you make the beginning so sad I almost dropped it because it was so depressing. And I would hope you don’t.
The problem why so many people doesn't like the prologue is because you put too many tragedies in there. Tragedy is good for shaping character and story telling, but you should mind how much tragedy a character received. Seriously, your delivery for "shaping" MC character are not good. And for a wish fulfillment story, to read that much bad things in prologue made readers confused and weird out by the story projection. I mean those much of tragedy only works in mature and horror/thriller stories. And so far this is not that kind. (Focus wise)
drooped ??
FanfictionLover:Stop mattering? Sick in the head? What, are you the author that you are sure the back story wouldn't matter in the long run? Sick in the head? That just means your too immature to understand things. What, you expect ths creators of those bloody gore horror movies to be psychos or something? Are you 13? 15? Years old? Cause your reasoning sucks. Really.
