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Thank you

Nice man, I'll use this if you don't mind? I'm going to rewrite this fic.

Man, that was so illogical. It ruins the immersion tbh.

U for real? So if you're in MC's position you would think that you're a Saiyan? Just because you have a tail? Lol. If so then you wouldn't last probably a month and die there. The fact is that Dragon Ball is completely fictional! It is illogical for a person to think that they're a Saiyan because they woke up with a tail attached to their body, gosh. The first thing that should come to your mind is "How did I get here?!" and not "Oh I have a tail, I must be a Saiyan no doubt".

It's only "4 meters" back when I read it. Maybe he changed it.

I'm alive btw, as for this fic I am planning on rewriting the whole thing, not all, but most. I have another account and I had earned more experience in writing a story there, so I want to turn this fic into something a little bit more interesting than it initially was along with my first ever book (This is my second book btw). So yeah, I'm still "planning" to do it as I'm currently occupied with a lot of things such as college. I really wanted to write the story, but because I already repeated a grade last school year, I couldn't risk repeating this year once again.

There's nothing wrong with giving your MC cheats that would help them to become strong, the problem lies with the character and on how you deliver the story with MC having cheats. The readers seek an interesting story to read, so getting an MC with overpowered cheat and is apparently a genius that could learn anything in a day makes it lame (no offense) as it is too overused, that they could search and find the same thing in hundreds of books here in Webnovel (That includes my first book). As Stan Lee said. "Making your character so powerful it could do anything and everything, only makes it uninteresting". I'm not saying that you should stop tho, I'm just hoping you could learn from Stan Lee's wise words as it could help you on writing your future books. Good luck.

I'm Asian bro...

I understand. Real men loathe Ntr after all.

Didn't that happen quite a few years ago? I heard that they even made a new law that prevents the same thing from happening again.