a person who loves to read
of reading
3428
Read books
alright hope to see you soon
more like Oh Thor
I love how you give the MC so many things to do most just do one thing it was nice to see
yeah but he shows no growth In one chapter he is crying and complaining and in the next, he acts like some edge lord some girl just decides to follow him everywhere he also goes strait to fight the night king for some reason instead of fighting in the war which would not only give him massive amounts of exp and more and better shadow soldiers he just keeps on making dumb decisions like when he tells the person left in charge for the mormonts that he was taking the girl with him acting like he was some lord when he was just some lowborn not asking telling him liked he had power also even though he raised shadow soldiers in the battle and they surrounded him no one said a thing even though there were 20 of them not hard to miss yet everyone goes blind and do not see them for some reason he also ordered the solder at his door to bring him to the corpses and again he acts like some young lord who could do what ever he wants like later when he revels his shadow to some solders and threatens him they call him lord he is not he is just some lowborn messenger and when they get to castle black people make fun of him and call him lownorn yet most of the watch is lowborn this story is just terrible it is all over the place it has dxd kind of power system where no one knows how strong some one is because they keep changing the power system he invest points into strength and health yet he is super fast for some reason and can fight so good as to easily kill a direwolf and its pack this is just bad
understandable
I am really like this story so far yet people are mad when he is turned into a devil more than 70% of fanfics for DXD the MC becomes a devil so it is just a plain stupid argument
I get it he his a child but he has a soul of a adult man yet he acts like a child I am sorry I hate it when the mc does that
is it a man or a woman it keeps calling her a noble woman yet he keeps saying noble man
you have to make the army's bigger there is no way 3,000 men can sail 270 warships
great chapter