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dozkiller07
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2021-01-12 01:44

I don't remember much as I read it long time ago and I thing I only read it like 20-50 chapter so u can say this is not a review but my deep shit frustration to this novel. 1) mc is a dumb ass bitch mother fucking 0 iq appshit.why? because he want to be strong and unlike some dick green head in some anime he actually work hard.and he got a good monster as price.now you all thing that's genuinely a good mc as he hard work and strives for what he wants right? no he reject the monster For stupid silver sparrow.now I don't know if this sparrow is transformed to some mighty phenoix or not in later chapter.but from what I remember this sparrows is the thotest thot a sparrow can ever be.she act like a queen but we all know she a bitch.if anything I will bitch slap that sparrow and drill it into the mc's ass. 2)what ever shit mc do he won't make any progress.i mean he actually gets strong superfast in some deep macho art that require being a masochist.but even after it he can't beat any bitch. more over he is in some deep shit relation with the sparrow I thing as he is a beta mc who actually get trolled by a freaking sparrow.not any heroine (if he got any.the way this story going he will gets ntred for sure)but a freaking sparrow.its like he won't even have a courage to **** a sparrow and teach her the place she belong but alas mc has dick that's smaller than a sparrows ass. 3)the whole world is weird for me.like the whole world is trying to NTR mc. you will get this feel when you read.like how much good he is on something but nobody cares.at the sametime some rich kid tried some half ass shit then here you go the genius of the century.like the world is trying to prove that mc is some mc of an hentai NTR manga.i don't like that wibe at all. 4)did I talk about the sparrow?she is a bitch a bitch that is born from bitch,for a bitch and all the bitch.by the bitch ,to the bitch and all the bitch English word could muster. and worst of all she can't even be usefull as a bitch.

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Panharithx
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Lol , spoiler alert alert Alert. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . The sparrow is am abnormal existence...

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This story has interesting concepts but, the grammar is really atrocious. There are other stories on this site that are even worse then this, however, I'm not going to be nice because of this. I understand that some people keep saying in the comments that the writing quality gets better at ch 18 or around ch 32. In the end I could not drag my self across the floor to reach such chapters. One of the main points I don't understand about the author is why if he has an editor already, just ask him to redo all your previous chapters. The author is dragging away potential readers due to not editing his starting chapters. Point 2. I feel like I'm reading a children's book due to all the sound effects. These sound effects take away from a story unless a child is reading them because most children don't know what most stuff sound like. That is why most children's books have the cow goes "moo" or the sheep goes "baa". It gives kids a 3 in 1 training. Training their vocals, reading comprehension and their understanding of what stuff sounds like. Point 2b. As an ***** with the understanding of the English language and sounds. I feel offended when I see a written sound effect. I know what a sword sound makes when it hits something with different densities. It just irks me because its like the author is saying "This is what it sound like to me and you should believe me." No... I don't believe sirens go "siren...siren" or swords go "slice" like their talking. Even the sound effects are off putting. Point 3: The cultivation is strange. I understand that being Original in concept is what authors should do. However, the cultivation with the steam punk vib (engine) and cultivation just don't mix well. I like the part about the soul-bonding, but, it could have been better executed. Point 4: The animals are puppets as far as I can tell. The start of the novel it shows the personality of the creatures and that was a good start, however, right as the soul binding was completed It was like the creatures them selves don't have their own thoughts anymore. It is more along the line as the people turn them into puppets then project their emotions into their soul-bonded puppet to be more like the host. Point 5: The MC does not have a solid goal. Yes, he wants to be in that championship thing but that does not make him insane about doing the most efficient cultivation training which most people fail at. The reason I do not believe this is due to the fact he lived a very normal life with his family. No sane person would tarnish such a thing. If the story showed he had a desire to be recognized due to certain bad pasts then I would believe it more. There are other points I could point out. But I don't know if the author can even read English so adding anymore would just be a waste of time for me and the reader of this wall of text.

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