My second review for this story. I don't know why I'm still reading this. I could handle the poor grammar but the amount of times I've seen the wrong names used is astounding. But to be fair the names can very well be interchangeable, they are mostly interchangeable. Its hard to comprehend the love interest here, he met Rachael, Sarah's sister, once before she fell for him. Jill or either of the twins would have made a better pairing. I don't know how much more I will read of this. The romance tag is an afterthought, MC while he gets stronger he's constantly bellow the bar. What you would think is foreshadowing is just forgotten plots points.
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Twins also got by central continent so there is no chance for them now
Just one of the many flaws in the book. I dropped it, there’s little thought put in this book. Let’s start with why did MOM and DAD pick the same useless monster, both of their families chose to handicap them with this useless thing, it makes no sense. You need to consider things from the point of view of the world. If for example the mutated silver fire sparrow had latent silver Phoenix genes and the way to unlock said genes was through the special refiner then I could accept his choice. What’s Sarah’s motivation for hating the MC, from her POV the MC is an idiot for hamstringing himself sure, but he has perseverance. Shit he saved her life, it makes no sense. I’ve read good stories where Authors mess with their MC but usually the bad things make sense to the world and the story. This just doesn’t make sense. At the start it seemed like that circulation method was unorthodox, people weren’t able to use it due to the pain. Seemed like the author wanted to paint the MC as someone with uncanny perseverance and mental fortitude. This was cool, even though he was painted as somewhat of an idiot for his partner choice. The story had the makings of a truly epic adventure but it failed miserably. Had MCs research found that the manual refiner been the key to unlocking hidden potential in mutated monsters and the means to using the refiner properly was the torturous circulation methods, then this would of had a start that made sense to the setting. People would under estimate him until his companion evolved. Instead you have this cop-out in terms of miracle fruits, all bad use of plot Armor.
