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TheRoof313
TheRoof313Lv35yr
2019-02-05 05:38

WARNING ⚠️ :to anyone who isn’t authist and has a religion don’t even bother to read this book it’s meant for people who enjoy to cuss religion The writer clearly has some problems his authis so he doesn’t like religion that okay but to go out of his way just to cuss and insult other religions and calling them back ward that’s too much t

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Dat_Smile
Dat_SmileLv5

Insulting ppl as "authist" for not having a religion isn't much better, no ?

Dvaita
DvaitaLv5

Do you mean atheist? Or autist? Lmao wtf is an authist? 😄😂 21st century and still believes in magic sky fairy lol

Dublin
DublinLv4

*Screams internally* 420WEED666DEVILKUSH140CHARACTERS 420WEED666DEVILKUSH140CHARACTERS 420WEED666DEVILKUSH140CHARACTERS 420WEED666DEVILKUSH140CHARACTERS

TheRoof313
TheRoof313Lv3

What does this have to do with magic?????

Dvaita:Do you mean atheist? Or autist? Lmao wtf is an authist? 😄😂 21st century and still believes in magic sky fairy lol
SucculentBoi
SucculentBoiLv5

Lad, I think you might be an autist, because I think you meant atheist.

Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

stop being oversensitive its called ******* of speech and why do you care what he says about religion it his opinion and hes just trying to make a novel and doesnt need people like you *****ing over nothing

Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

why is the word fre*dom blocked

Milo6824:stop being oversensitive its called ******* of speech and why do you care what he says about religion it his opinion and hes just trying to make a novel and doesnt need people like you *****ing over nothing
Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

there are many words that are blocked for some reason... A-dult is one of them

Milo6824:why is the word fre*dom blocked
Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

i see you haven't read enough novels about wizards or magicians

TheRoof313:What does this have to do with magic?????
Dvaita
DvaitaLv5

You were throwing a tantrum over how the novel is insulting religions and God and I just noted how silly it is to believe in some God at this point of time, despite all science and technology pointing to the fact that there's no God

TheRoof313:What does this have to do with magic?????
Dvaita
DvaitaLv5

Welcome to China

Milo6824:why is the word fre*dom blocked
chaos227
chaos227Lv5

Science and technology hasn't pointed that there's no god. Atheist say there's no God, science doesn't. The concept of God/gods is something beyond the scope of science right now, so it can't be proven or disproved. That means believing in God/gods is entirely up to every individual until we can scientifically prove or disprove it.

Dvaita:You were throwing a tantrum over how the novel is insulting religions and God and I just noted how silly it is to believe in some God at this point of time, despite all science and technology pointing to the fact that there's no God
TheRoof313
TheRoof313Lv3

I said it befor and will say it again if you don’t believe in god so be it it’s your choice but that doesn’t give you the right to insult someone’s believe what ever it is mister so you and that ****er of a writer can go **** your selfs bec your a pice of trash that see the world only from the view any one else can be damnd that you and the other ****er view last word befor I go FUCK you author

Dvaita:You were throwing a tantrum over how the novel is insulting religions and God and I just noted how silly it is to believe in some God at this point of time, despite all science and technology pointing to the fact that there's no God
TheRoof313
TheRoof313Lv3

And by the way there is no proof for the non existence of god

Dvaita:You were throwing a tantrum over how the novel is insulting religions and God and I just noted how silly it is to believe in some God at this point of time, despite all science and technology pointing to the fact that there's no God
Kakeru
KakeruLv12

You've made a mistake, those who don't believe in God/Gods are called "atheist" not "authist".

Dvaita
DvaitaLv5

Sure. I mean I could claim every woman has two invisible penises growing on her ears, which is completely indetectable by modern science. Equally valid as belief in God, equally silly. It's a free world. Doesn't mean religion needs to be treated seriously. It's only harmed us as a species

chaos227:Science and technology hasn't pointed that there's no god. Atheist say there's no God, science doesn't. The concept of God/gods is something beyond the scope of science right now, so it can't be proven or disproved. That means believing in God/gods is entirely up to every individual until we can scientifically prove or disprove it.
Dvaita
DvaitaLv5

Aww. If your worldview is hurt so much by a mere atheist fictional novel please don't go to any religious debate. Also, you're like totally welcome to stop reading this instead of giving low scores purely because your feefees were hurt. Nobody forced you to read this at gunpoint

TheRoof313:I said it befor and will say it again if you don’t believe in god so be it it’s your choice but that doesn’t give you the right to insult someone’s believe what ever it is mister so you and that ****er of a writer can go **** your selfs bec your a pice of trash that see the world only from the view any one else can be damnd that you and the other ****er view last word befor I go FUCK you author
Mutt
MuttLv5

My like is in relation to your first part of your comment. They can believe whatever they want and sometimes people like to have the mental support religion can provide. It isnt our right to be asshats because they believe in something we dont.

Dvaita:Do you mean atheist? Or autist? Lmao wtf is an authist? 😄😂 21st century and still believes in magic sky fairy lol
Mutt
MuttLv5

Well as Far as I read he looks at a bunch of praying people and goes "They are pretty backwards indeed"

Dvaita:Do you mean atheist? Or autist? Lmao wtf is an authist? 😄😂 21st century and still believes in magic sky fairy lol
TheRoof313
TheRoof313Lv3

I did mister and I will not have a debate with someone who doesn’t even understand what I am talking about I won’t bother

Dvaita:Aww. If your worldview is hurt so much by a mere atheist fictional novel please don't go to any religious debate. Also, you're like totally welcome to stop reading this instead of giving low scores purely because your feefees were hurt. Nobody forced you to read this at gunpoint
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Mystic_Main
Mystic_MainLv4

Another really crappily written novel about magic. I'm very pissed, so if this review comes off as ranty, I apologize. First I'd like to point out that this novel is basically a carbon copy of Throne of Magical Arcana. If you read both of them back to back for 20 chapters, you'll be sold about this point. Both live in a world of magic, both worlds of magic have a religious background setting. Both religious background settings are hostile to any magic besides their own. In this way, Throne of Magical Arcana is head and shoulders above this paultry copycat. The only thing that separates these two novels, and I suspect the only reason there hasn't been a lawsuit filed against this plagiarizing piece of crap author is the fact that this story has no musical elements, which in Throne of Magical Arcana, is the major selling point for the first arc. Beyond that, the writing in itself is subpar in its execution, the synopsis mentions a "microchip" that allows the MC to use magic more easily than any other spell caster in the story. This isn't exactly new content and it certainly doesn't break any tropes. The problem with this is the fact that for the first twenty chapters this thing is completely absent. There's no mention of it, in fact, there's no mention of anything having to do with the previous world the MC lived in. Not a single sentence was used to describe anything but the most basic of basic tropes of how the MC died. There's no "want to go back" there's no "I miss my family" there's nothing in this story to show that the MC even came from another world besides the very most basic of basic analogies that the MC sometimes uses to describe things in his mind to us the reader. And even this is very lacking, it's so pathetic that my assessment of it is that the author found it horrendously difficult to come up with a plot that didn't make these analogies. It's not surprising to me really, he copied Throne of Magical Arcana's plot, so he clearly lacks imagination. It doesn't surprise me in the least that he couldn't come up with a nicer way to describe things in his story besides using analogies that fit our world. Getting back on topic, the "microchip" is completely absent for twenty whole chapters and when it finally does show up, it shows up in such a ridiculously plot armory way that I don't even know what to do with it. There's no clever execution, there's nothing to hide it. It's literally "Oh, this is how I'm supposed to do magic, oh damn that's really hard!" "I really wish I had !@$@%!" *Poof* "!@$@% Has been acquired.". LITERALLY. THAT IS LITERALLY WHAT HAPPENS. YOU CAN GO LOOK AT IT YOURSELF! Don't even get me started about more nonsense that happens in this novel. One thing I hate the most about novels is how they sometimes forget their own past plot. Like how something at the start of a story is really important but later on you stop and realize that the major plot point that the entire novel is built around isn't even being mentioned anymore. The mc makes choice to practice fire magic. "Ok." The mc decides to practice fire magic inside his house. "eh" The mc makes huge fire ball of death 3 times more powerful than all the other fireballs he released so far. Super-Fireball explodes shaking his entire basement and leaves a massive meter wide crater on the ground. 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Neveryoumindme
NeveryoumindmeLv5

Reading this novel is rage inducing, it keeps repeating the same basic facts and words over and over and over and over. The chapter where he learns magic is one of the worst offenders, the word Fireball is repeated so much i can still hear it echo around my skull. There is also the one where every phrase talks about "heavy armored knights", he almost uses those exact three words 20 times in a row. The author also has every single character talk as if every other person nearby is a clueless idiot with a memory span of 30 seconds. "Hello friend, it is me your fat friend. We've know each other for 14 years and i still have to introduce myself to you every time we meet. I also have to clearly explain my family background and the fact that i love visiting brothels. Have you heard about Mark? He's our classmate that clearly hates you. He hates you because you are going to marry Clarissa and he told you many times he loves Clarissa too! How incredibly interesting! Did you notice that today the sky was blue? It was the same yesterday and as far as memory goes the color hasn't changed, isn't it wonderful?". This is not an exact quote but if you read the novel you'll find very similar situations. Explanations about stuff is similarly repeated ad nauseam, for example when his computer thingy is introduced we get and explanation on how it will greatly speed up his learning new spells. Now every time the MC talks about new spells he has found he also reminds us about the computer that is going to help him, again. The author or translator doesn't even bother changing up the wording a little, it's like the explanation has been copy and pasted multiple times in different chapters. At this point i'm not even sure if the author is doing it because he thinks the people reading are unimaginably stupid or he's trying to beef up the word count. The story is nothing to write home about, incredibly generic and borrows a whole bunch of elements from other more "famous" novels in this particular genre. Church clearly bad, he has computer in the new body even though it was injected in his blood in the previous word???, he learns magic from a random bored guy and he becomes ruthless at the flip of a coin. I'm quite surprised he hasn't raped anyone yet due to yin and yang imbalance... Almost forgot, he has the computer in his head doing nothing the whole time instead of already calculating stuff he'll obviously need in the future. He'll wait till the last moment to turn it on and find the best combination for a spell he had for months. Why? Anyway i'm bored, i don't feel like writing about this novel anymore. This story is crap, the translator is crappy, he probably pops the raws in google translate and just changes a few words if he's feeling it. If he's doing more then that it sure doesn't show. Don't waste your time with this, eating handfuls of sawdust would be a more productive and fun way to spend your valuable time.

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