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ThrustThunderLv66yr
2019-02-04 19:02

This novel copies the overly used formula that most Reincarnated into a Wizard World stories do. And worst of all the touted "Super Computer" hasn't even appeared yet! If you'd like to read *Good* Wizard World stories I'd recommend: If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Novels: Warlock of the Magus World (The OG reincarnation with a chip novel, one of the Best out there) Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC) The Wizard World (Chip story that has very Fever Dream set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream) When A Mage Revolts (A guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages) Advent of the Archmage (Guy reincarnates as God of Lights Chosen, gets skillbook shop and quests to save world) The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic)

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Milo6824Lv5

so its not like you could do better

ThrustThunderLv6

Neither could you. In fact, it's appears you cannot even make a rebuttal as well as I can.

Milo6824:so its not like you could do better
Milo6824Lv5

i don't have time to argue with some piece of sh*t living in his mothers basement writing bad reviews just so he can feel better about his sh*tty life

ThrustThunder:Neither could you. In fact, it's appears you cannot even make a rebuttal as well as I can.
ThrustThunderLv6

But... you just did argue??? You just contradicted yourself twice in one sentience.

Milo6824:i don't have time to argue with some piece of sh*t living in his mothers basement writing bad reviews just so he can feel better about his sh*tty life
Milo6824Lv5

I said I didn’t have time not that I wouldn’t argue now I’m in class so I won’t be responding to you anymore

ThrustThunder:But... you just did argue??? You just contradicted yourself twice in one sentience.
ThrustThunderLv6

Tell your 9th grade English teacher I said 'Hi'!

Milo6824:I said I didn’t have time not that I wouldn’t argue now I’m in class so I won’t be responding to you anymore
Milo6824Lv5

It’s 12th grade and the only reason I’m responding is because I’m at break and there’s nothing to read

ThrustThunder:Tell your 9th grade English teacher I said 'Hi'!
ThrustThunderLv6

Might I recommend one of the wonderful Novels listed in my review? They are all of the Reincarnated Wizard with a Cheat ability Genre and have hundreds of chapters each.

Milo6824:It’s 12th grade and the only reason I’m responding is because I’m at break and there’s nothing to read
ArchenaLv6

Its a complete garbage. If you are happy with it then thats ok too. one man's shi.t can be the food for another weed. But don't try to bark here in the comment. You can shove your 5 star comment to your as.s

Milo6824:so its not like you could do better
ThrustThunderLv6

Hear hear!

Archena:Its a complete garbage. If you are happy with it then thats ok too. one man's shi.t can be the food for another weed. But don't try to bark here in the comment. You can shove your 5 star comment to your as.s
Nox_Invictus_Lv6

The Throne of Magical Arcana is an good reincarnated into a wizard book, but the MC has an "Spirit Library" containing a bunch of textbooks from this world. He uses this prior knowledge to guide him, as the world that he is reincarnated into is similar to ours.

ThrustThunderLv6

The world is nothing like ours...? It's Medieval Europe with Magical Knights and Bards and Giant Death dimensions. It's similar to the one from this Novel, that's why I added it

Nox_Invictus_:The Throne of Magical Arcana is an good reincarnated into a wizard book, but the MC has an "Spirit Library" containing a bunch of textbooks from this world. He uses this prior knowledge to guide him, as the world that he is reincarnated into is similar to ours.
Nox_Invictus_Lv6

Oh, I meant the world is similar in its inner workings, like Physics and Chemistry are not the exact same, but close enough for the MC to use the Earths knowledge. He can apply concepts like the periodic table and atomic theory to this world

ThrustThunder:The world is nothing like ours...? It's Medieval Europe with Magical Knights and Bards and Giant Death dimensions. It's similar to the one from this Novel, that's why I added it
HollowGodLv5

Yo mate , give me some good cheat novels , would be appreciated!

ThrustThunder:Might I recommend one of the wonderful Novels listed in my review? They are all of the Reincarnated Wizard with a Cheat ability Genre and have hundreds of chapters each.
ThrustThunderLv6

If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Cheat Novels you can find on Novelupdates: The New World (Teen gets trapped in a cave when the world gets a system, does what he can to survive. VERY WELL WRITTEN!)2016 The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills, forced to pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Smartest MC I've read in a long time.)2015 The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System. He gets killed so much he Returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues!)2017 Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion)2018 A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Rich/OP)2017 The City of Terror (Guy wakes up with a status screen in a fever dream city where it's kill or be killed by Chinese monsters of lore, becomes OP)2016 Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP)2016 The Arcane Emperor (Guy sends himself to Gaming World by flubbing a spell, ends up acquiring an OP class)2016 Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter)2017 Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless)2013 Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach)2012 Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!)2013 The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds)2017 Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy reincarnates back 10 years and uses VRMMORPG to get revenge on the people who killed him through Shameless looting)2010 Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary)2015 Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens)2015 Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven)2016 The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream)2012 Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read)2015 Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC)2016 When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages)2016 The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic)2017 Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a reincarnator who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces)2015 Upgrade Specialist in Another World (Increase your cultivation by making your accessories OP? Yes please!)2011 Strongest Abandoned Son (A Cultivator reincarnates into our World, uses powers to slap faces and get rich)2012 The Desolate Era (Kid reincarnates into Wuxia World with OP cultivation technique, eventually kills Gods with his sword. First Novel I read here.)2014 Throne of Magical Arcana 2013

HollowGod:Yo mate , give me some good cheat novels , would be appreciated!
HollowGodLv5

My man , you got my thanks!

ThrustThunder:If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Cheat Novels you can find on Novelupdates: The New World (Teen gets trapped in a cave when the world gets a system, does what he can to survive. VERY WELL WRITTEN!)2016 The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills, forced to pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Smartest MC I've read in a long time.)2015 The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System. He gets killed so much he Returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues!)2017 Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion)2018 A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Rich/OP)2017 The City of Terror (Guy wakes up with a status screen in a fever dream city where it's kill or be killed by Chinese monsters of lore, becomes OP)2016 Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP)2016 The Arcane Emperor (Guy sends himself to Gaming World by flubbing a spell, ends up acquiring an OP class)2016 Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter)2017 Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless)2013 Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach)2012 Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!)2013 The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds)2017 Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy reincarnates back 10 years and uses VRMMORPG to get revenge on the people who killed him through Shameless looting)2010 Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary)2015 Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens)2015 Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven)2016 The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream)2012 Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read)2015 Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC)2016 When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages)2016 The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic)2017 Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a reincarnator who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces)2015 Upgrade Specialist in Another World (Increase your cultivation by making your accessories OP? Yes please!)2011 Strongest Abandoned Son (A Cultivator reincarnates into our World, uses powers to slap faces and get rich)2012 The Desolate Era (Kid reincarnates into Wuxia World with OP cultivation technique, eventually kills Gods with his sword. First Novel I read here.)2014 Throne of Magical Arcana 2013
HosakuLv6

Nice suggestions

ThrustThunder:If you'd like some suggestions of my favorite Cheat Novels you can find on Novelupdates: The New World (Teen gets trapped in a cave when the world gets a system, does what he can to survive. VERY WELL WRITTEN!)2016 The Games We Play by Ryuugi (Kid gains power of Videogame Protagonist, Min/max's his skills, forced to pretend to be Badass Mafia Boss to outsmart Godly enemies. The most Cunning/Smartest MC I've read in a long time.)2015 The World Turned into a Game After I Woke up (Guy's World gains Gaming System. He gets killed so much he Returns to the past, Shameless looting ensues!)2017 Dragonborn Saga by Don_Dokhmesy (Guy reborn into a overly Modded VR Skyrim World, Becomes Lord of Immersion)2018 A Monster Who Levels Up (Guy transforms into Monsters as his trait, Uses their unique skills to become Rich/OP)2017 The City of Terror (Guy wakes up with a status screen in a fever dream city where it's kill or be killed by Chinese monsters of lore, becomes OP)2016 Seoul Station’s Necromancer (Guy returns from conquering a System World to find it has bleed into his own World, becomes OP)2016 The Arcane Emperor (Guy sends himself to Gaming World by flubbing a spell, ends up acquiring an OP class)2016 Shadow Hack (Guy gets Shadow Clones to XP grind for him, becomes more OP every chapter)2017 Leveling Up And Becoming Undefeatable (NEET Reincarnated with a System that gives the Skills of Other Wuxia Protagonists, junk food writing at it's most shameless)2013 Invincible Level Up (Begins exactly as LUaBU, but takes a more serious World building approach)2012 Godly Model Creator (Kid in Superpower World uses ability to copy others skills to become OP, Kills his enemies!)2013 The Strongest Gene (Guy reincarnates to World of genetic modification with cheat skill of Luck. Creative face slapping abounds)2017 Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World (Guy reincarnates back 10 years and uses VRMMORPG to get revenge on the people who killed him through Shameless looting)2010 Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God (Rips off Rebirth heavily, but the release rate is exemplary)2015 Night Ranger (Transferred into a D&D VRMMORPG, Guy must gain Power before the Apocalypse happens)2015 Advent of the Archmage (Same as Night Ranger but more Magic Driven)2016 The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream)2012 Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read)2015 Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC)2016 When A Mage Revolts (Guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages)2016 The Book Eating Magician (Guy's hand turns into a Grimoire that can eat books to learn magic)2017 Tales of Demons and Gods (Mad Snail's Novel, turned Manga, turned Anime about a reincarnator who uses his Advanced knowledge to become rich and slap faces)2015 Upgrade Specialist in Another World (Increase your cultivation by making your accessories OP? Yes please!)2011 Strongest Abandoned Son (A Cultivator reincarnates into our World, uses powers to slap faces and get rich)2012 The Desolate Era (Kid reincarnates into Wuxia World with OP cultivation technique, eventually kills Gods with his sword. First Novel I read here.)2014 Throne of Magical Arcana 2013
HansTheCoolLv5

Good going brother, you really destroyed that bastard

ThrustThunder:Might I recommend one of the wonderful Novels listed in my review? They are all of the Reincarnated Wizard with a Cheat ability Genre and have hundreds of chapters each.
chloee123Lv3

So not recommended??

ThrustThunderLv6

It's a very well written and entertaining story to read so far. And with it's recent mass release it's the perfect time to start. I would suggest that you also read the other listed Novels as well since they are much farther along in their translations and have the benefit of more polish and editing.

chloee123:So not recommended??
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Mystic_MainLv4

Another really crappily written novel about magic. I'm very pissed, so if this review comes off as ranty, I apologize. First I'd like to point out that this novel is basically a carbon copy of Throne of Magical Arcana. If you read both of them back to back for 20 chapters, you'll be sold about this point. Both live in a world of magic, both worlds of magic have a religious background setting. Both religious background settings are hostile to any magic besides their own. In this way, Throne of Magical Arcana is head and shoulders above this paultry copycat. The only thing that separates these two novels, and I suspect the only reason there hasn't been a lawsuit filed against this plagiarizing piece of crap author is the fact that this story has no musical elements, which in Throne of Magical Arcana, is the major selling point for the first arc. Beyond that, the writing in itself is subpar in its execution, the synopsis mentions a "microchip" that allows the MC to use magic more easily than any other spell caster in the story. This isn't exactly new content and it certainly doesn't break any tropes. The problem with this is the fact that for the first twenty chapters this thing is completely absent. There's no mention of it, in fact, there's no mention of anything having to do with the previous world the MC lived in. Not a single sentence was used to describe anything but the most basic of basic tropes of how the MC died. There's no "want to go back" there's no "I miss my family" there's nothing in this story to show that the MC even came from another world besides the very most basic of basic analogies that the MC sometimes uses to describe things in his mind to us the reader. And even this is very lacking, it's so pathetic that my assessment of it is that the author found it horrendously difficult to come up with a plot that didn't make these analogies. It's not surprising to me really, he copied Throne of Magical Arcana's plot, so he clearly lacks imagination. It doesn't surprise me in the least that he couldn't come up with a nicer way to describe things in his story besides using analogies that fit our world. Getting back on topic, the "microchip" is completely absent for twenty whole chapters and when it finally does show up, it shows up in such a ridiculously plot armory way that I don't even know what to do with it. There's no clever execution, there's nothing to hide it. It's literally "Oh, this is how I'm supposed to do magic, oh damn that's really hard!" "I really wish I had !@$@%!" *Poof* "!@$@% Has been acquired.". LITERALLY. THAT IS LITERALLY WHAT HAPPENS. YOU CAN GO LOOK AT IT YOURSELF! Don't even get me started about more nonsense that happens in this novel. One thing I hate the most about novels is how they sometimes forget their own past plot. Like how something at the start of a story is really important but later on you stop and realize that the major plot point that the entire novel is built around isn't even being mentioned anymore. The mc makes choice to practice fire magic. "Ok." The mc decides to practice fire magic inside his house. "eh" The mc makes huge fire ball of death 3 times more powerful than all the other fireballs he released so far. Super-Fireball explodes shaking his entire basement and leaves a massive meter wide crater on the ground. 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NeveryoumindmeLv5

Reading this novel is rage inducing, it keeps repeating the same basic facts and words over and over and over and over. The chapter where he learns magic is one of the worst offenders, the word Fireball is repeated so much i can still hear it echo around my skull. There is also the one where every phrase talks about "heavy armored knights", he almost uses those exact three words 20 times in a row. The author also has every single character talk as if every other person nearby is a clueless idiot with a memory span of 30 seconds. "Hello friend, it is me your fat friend. We've know each other for 14 years and i still have to introduce myself to you every time we meet. I also have to clearly explain my family background and the fact that i love visiting brothels. Have you heard about Mark? He's our classmate that clearly hates you. He hates you because you are going to marry Clarissa and he told you many times he loves Clarissa too! How incredibly interesting! Did you notice that today the sky was blue? It was the same yesterday and as far as memory goes the color hasn't changed, isn't it wonderful?". This is not an exact quote but if you read the novel you'll find very similar situations. Explanations about stuff is similarly repeated ad nauseam, for example when his computer thingy is introduced we get and explanation on how it will greatly speed up his learning new spells. Now every time the MC talks about new spells he has found he also reminds us about the computer that is going to help him, again. The author or translator doesn't even bother changing up the wording a little, it's like the explanation has been copy and pasted multiple times in different chapters. At this point i'm not even sure if the author is doing it because he thinks the people reading are unimaginably stupid or he's trying to beef up the word count. The story is nothing to write home about, incredibly generic and borrows a whole bunch of elements from other more "famous" novels in this particular genre. Church clearly bad, he has computer in the new body even though it was injected in his blood in the previous word???, he learns magic from a random bored guy and he becomes ruthless at the flip of a coin. I'm quite surprised he hasn't raped anyone yet due to yin and yang imbalance... Almost forgot, he has the computer in his head doing nothing the whole time instead of already calculating stuff he'll obviously need in the future. He'll wait till the last moment to turn it on and find the best combination for a spell he had for months. Why? Anyway i'm bored, i don't feel like writing about this novel anymore. This story is crap, the translator is crappy, he probably pops the raws in google translate and just changes a few words if he's feeling it. If he's doing more then that it sure doesn't show. Don't waste your time with this, eating handfuls of sawdust would be a more productive and fun way to spend your valuable time.

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