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chaos227
chaos227Lv56yr
2019-02-05 15:54

Honestly, we came for the computer but so far nothing. The story is similar to many others like it. Once you've read one, you've pretty much read them all. They just different names and behave a little bit different from each other.

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Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

bull**** you dont know what your talking about tons of novels out there are very similar but all unique this isnt just like every one and i like it so keep all your negativity away

chaos227
chaos227Lv5

So telling it how it is, is called negativity? There are some novels out there that are "unique" but this isn't one of them.

Milo6824:bull**** you dont know what your talking about tons of novels out there are very similar but all unique this isnt just like every one and i like it so keep all your negativity away
Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

you are a downer who insults novels thats called negativity this is a great novel and you probably couldn't come up with anything better so what the situation the MC' in has been done before just try coming up with a reincarnation story that is completely original its almost impossible and the characters are completely original so the story is anything but bland

chaos227:So telling it how it is, is called negativity? There are some novels out there that are "unique" but this isn't one of them.
chaos227
chaos227Lv5

Insult the novel? Where? Stop being so butthurt at my review. I've read many novels and this one basically took many of the premises, settings, so I called it out on being just like any other. That's not negativity, that's an observation.

Milo6824:you are a downer who insults novels thats called negativity this is a great novel and you probably couldn't come up with anything better so what the situation the MC' in has been done before just try coming up with a reincarnation story that is completely original its almost impossible and the characters are completely original so the story is anything but bland
Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

you don't understand stories well enough to see how great this novel is it doesn't matter that it's similar to other works it has plenty of originality and it is easy to connect with the characters and you just try to pass it off as a worthless knockoff

chaos227:Insult the novel? Where? Stop being so butthurt at my review. I've read many novels and this one basically took many of the premises, settings, so I called it out on being just like any other. That's not negativity, that's an observation.
chaos227
chaos227Lv5

I know stories well enough to know that this novel wouldn't give me any new experience that others haven't already come up with. If you love this novel then kudos to you, but to me it is a knockoff.

Milo6824:you don't understand stories well enough to see how great this novel is it doesn't matter that it's similar to other works it has plenty of originality and it is easy to connect with the characters and you just try to pass it off as a worthless knockoff
Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

Then your just missing out

chaos227:I know stories well enough to know that this novel wouldn't give me any new experience that others haven't already come up with. If you love this novel then kudos to you, but to me it is a knockoff.
Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

if you are annoyed at the fact that there are too many novels which have the same start you should not be surprised because there are not that many ways to start a novel, who knows maybe author read a novel and decided that the start is amazing and he would start in a similar fashion before branching off from that said story and develop from there?

chaos227:I know stories well enough to know that this novel wouldn't give me any new experience that others haven't already come up with. If you love this novel then kudos to you, but to me it is a knockoff.
chaos227
chaos227Lv5

The only thing I'm annoyed by is the fact that we still haven't seen the computer yet. And I doubt its gonna branch out in any unique way.

Earthshaker34:if you are annoyed at the fact that there are too many novels which have the same start you should not be surprised because there are not that many ways to start a novel, who knows maybe author read a novel and decided that the start is amazing and he would start in a similar fashion before branching off from that said story and develop from there?
Earthshaker34
Earthshaker34Lv6

I've read only 2 chapters right now. from what I've read it's easy to guess that MC doesn't know anything about Chip. so the only explanation is that it was in the body of Merlin all along before he even reincarnated. so it needs some energy or activation signal or something entirely different to activate, after all, if it was in Merlin all along why didn't it activate? so the only reason why it didn't happen is that Merlin doesn't have Mana or whatever resource Wizards use!

chaos227:The only thing I'm annoyed by is the fact that we still haven't seen the computer yet. And I doubt its gonna branch out in any unique way.
Archena
ArchenaLv6

Its a complete garbage. If you are happy with it then thats ok too. one man's shi.t can be the food for another weed. But don't try to bark here in the comment. You can shove your 5 star comment to your as.s

Milo6824:bull**** you dont know what your talking about tons of novels out there are very similar but all unique this isnt just like every one and i like it so keep all your negativity away
Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

Your a stupid inbred a*shole who doesn’t know ****

Archena:Its a complete garbage. If you are happy with it then thats ok too. one man's shi.t can be the food for another weed. But don't try to bark here in the comment. You can shove your 5 star comment to your as.s
Archena
ArchenaLv6

Now! What we have here..... The exact number of stars in your comment is 5 !!!! I told you to shove 5 star comment in your as.s. It seems that you really obeyed my command, But like a loyal dog you tried to impress your master and shove too hard that the 5 stars from your as.s went a long way and came out of your mouth again.

Milo6824:Your a stupid inbred a*shole who doesn’t know ****
Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

Look you uncultured sack of **** you need to find stuff better to do then spout nonsense that no one cares about just to overcompensate for your ugly face and tiny penis

Archena:Now! What we have here..... The exact number of stars in your comment is 5 !!!! I told you to shove 5 star comment in your as.s. It seems that you really obeyed my command, But like a loyal dog you tried to impress your master and shove too hard that the 5 stars from your as.s went a long way and came out of your mouth again.
Archena
ArchenaLv6

Well, son! for this ugly face your Mama fell in love and from this tiny penis you were born.

Milo6824:Look you uncultured sack of **** you need to find stuff better to do then spout nonsense that no one cares about just to overcompensate for your ugly face and tiny penis
Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

The only way you’d ever get laid is if you crawled up a chicken’s a*s and waited

Archena:Well, son! for this ugly face your Mama fell in love and from this tiny penis you were born.
Archena
ArchenaLv6

You think your species are of chicken? Boy, you are suffering from species dysphoria. Anyway, your mom did tell you about her first time with your dad !!! That's so bold of her. Yeah, you know right. Our first *** was ana.l. Well most of our se.x was ****. Your mom liked it in the as.s . She was a total as.s freak.

Milo6824:The only way you’d ever get laid is if you crawled up a chicken’s a*s and waited
Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

Well I bet you didn’t know but your mom loves gangbangs and I may be your dad or I could be the 20 black guys

Milo6824
Milo6824Lv5

I’m bored with you you just repeat the same **** over and over again so I’m going to stop waisting my time with you

Archena:You think your species are of chicken? Boy, you are suffering from species dysphoria. Anyway, your mom did tell you about her first time with your dad !!! That's so bold of her. Yeah, you know right. Our first *** was ana.l. Well most of our se.x was ****. Your mom liked it in the as.s . She was a total as.s freak.
ThrustThunder
ThrustThunderLv6

It's a knockoff of quite a few different stories: Warlock of the Magus World (Genius with a Biochip reincarnates into the wizard world, Devours his enemies. The best example of a *Ruthless* MC I've ever read) Age of Adepts (Another Wizard chip story about a truly guileful MC) The Wizard World (Chip story that has very detailed set pieces, like reading a vivid Lucid dream) When A Mage Revolts (A guy reincarnates with a system that trolls him, eventually becomes the Hero of all persecuted Mages) Throne of Magical Arcana (Just like WaMR but he has a magical library instead, same type of magic system) But you know what they say “If you copy from one book, that’s plagiarism; if you copy from many books, that’s research.”

chaos227:I know stories well enough to know that this novel wouldn't give me any new experience that others haven't already come up with. If you love this novel then kudos to you, but to me it is a knockoff.
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Mystic_Main
Mystic_MainLv4

Another really crappily written novel about magic. I'm very pissed, so if this review comes off as ranty, I apologize. First I'd like to point out that this novel is basically a carbon copy of Throne of Magical Arcana. If you read both of them back to back for 20 chapters, you'll be sold about this point. Both live in a world of magic, both worlds of magic have a religious background setting. Both religious background settings are hostile to any magic besides their own. In this way, Throne of Magical Arcana is head and shoulders above this paultry copycat. The only thing that separates these two novels, and I suspect the only reason there hasn't been a lawsuit filed against this plagiarizing piece of crap author is the fact that this story has no musical elements, which in Throne of Magical Arcana, is the major selling point for the first arc. Beyond that, the writing in itself is subpar in its execution, the synopsis mentions a "microchip" that allows the MC to use magic more easily than any other spell caster in the story. This isn't exactly new content and it certainly doesn't break any tropes. The problem with this is the fact that for the first twenty chapters this thing is completely absent. There's no mention of it, in fact, there's no mention of anything having to do with the previous world the MC lived in. Not a single sentence was used to describe anything but the most basic of basic tropes of how the MC died. There's no "want to go back" there's no "I miss my family" there's nothing in this story to show that the MC even came from another world besides the very most basic of basic analogies that the MC sometimes uses to describe things in his mind to us the reader. And even this is very lacking, it's so pathetic that my assessment of it is that the author found it horrendously difficult to come up with a plot that didn't make these analogies. It's not surprising to me really, he copied Throne of Magical Arcana's plot, so he clearly lacks imagination. It doesn't surprise me in the least that he couldn't come up with a nicer way to describe things in his story besides using analogies that fit our world. Getting back on topic, the "microchip" is completely absent for twenty whole chapters and when it finally does show up, it shows up in such a ridiculously plot armory way that I don't even know what to do with it. There's no clever execution, there's nothing to hide it. It's literally "Oh, this is how I'm supposed to do magic, oh damn that's really hard!" "I really wish I had !@$@%!" *Poof* "!@$@% Has been acquired.". LITERALLY. THAT IS LITERALLY WHAT HAPPENS. YOU CAN GO LOOK AT IT YOURSELF! Don't even get me started about more nonsense that happens in this novel. One thing I hate the most about novels is how they sometimes forget their own past plot. Like how something at the start of a story is really important but later on you stop and realize that the major plot point that the entire novel is built around isn't even being mentioned anymore. The mc makes choice to practice fire magic. "Ok." The mc decides to practice fire magic inside his house. "eh" The mc makes huge fire ball of death 3 times more powerful than all the other fireballs he released so far. Super-Fireball explodes shaking his entire basement and leaves a massive meter wide crater on the ground. 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Neveryoumindme
NeveryoumindmeLv5

Reading this novel is rage inducing, it keeps repeating the same basic facts and words over and over and over and over. The chapter where he learns magic is one of the worst offenders, the word Fireball is repeated so much i can still hear it echo around my skull. There is also the one where every phrase talks about "heavy armored knights", he almost uses those exact three words 20 times in a row. The author also has every single character talk as if every other person nearby is a clueless idiot with a memory span of 30 seconds. "Hello friend, it is me your fat friend. We've know each other for 14 years and i still have to introduce myself to you every time we meet. I also have to clearly explain my family background and the fact that i love visiting brothels. Have you heard about Mark? He's our classmate that clearly hates you. He hates you because you are going to marry Clarissa and he told you many times he loves Clarissa too! How incredibly interesting! Did you notice that today the sky was blue? It was the same yesterday and as far as memory goes the color hasn't changed, isn't it wonderful?". This is not an exact quote but if you read the novel you'll find very similar situations. Explanations about stuff is similarly repeated ad nauseam, for example when his computer thingy is introduced we get and explanation on how it will greatly speed up his learning new spells. Now every time the MC talks about new spells he has found he also reminds us about the computer that is going to help him, again. The author or translator doesn't even bother changing up the wording a little, it's like the explanation has been copy and pasted multiple times in different chapters. At this point i'm not even sure if the author is doing it because he thinks the people reading are unimaginably stupid or he's trying to beef up the word count. The story is nothing to write home about, incredibly generic and borrows a whole bunch of elements from other more "famous" novels in this particular genre. Church clearly bad, he has computer in the new body even though it was injected in his blood in the previous word???, he learns magic from a random bored guy and he becomes ruthless at the flip of a coin. I'm quite surprised he hasn't raped anyone yet due to yin and yang imbalance... Almost forgot, he has the computer in his head doing nothing the whole time instead of already calculating stuff he'll obviously need in the future. He'll wait till the last moment to turn it on and find the best combination for a spell he had for months. Why? Anyway i'm bored, i don't feel like writing about this novel anymore. This story is crap, the translator is crappy, he probably pops the raws in google translate and just changes a few words if he's feeling it. If he's doing more then that it sure doesn't show. Don't waste your time with this, eating handfuls of sawdust would be a more productive and fun way to spend your valuable time.

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