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Riki_Abdurahim

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i like action novel. Fanfic is also ok

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  • Riki_Abdurahima month ago
    Replied to MD_Toriqul_Islam

    What you write is the reflection of yourself. So he is right. im sorry islam and christianity hurt you so much. may you find some peace soon

  • Riki_Abdurahim5 months ago
    Replied to ChesterCure

    Happy writing πŸ‘

  • Riki_Abdurahim5 months ago
    Commented

    Also, you can have dimensional travel, maybe after light became the god of the new world. if you have him travel early, your story will be divided. one in this world and another. it will be difficult to manage.

  • Riki_Abdurahim5 months ago
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    you already have it man πŸ˜€ Death : Light (Kira) Famine : Misa War : Balalaika Conquest :Makima Pestilence : Suguru This is a good cast. Balalaika is great. you dont have to change her. just make her have all the power from the original black lagoo. Hell, can even merge the two world (black lagoo and death note) into one. And dont forget about Teru 'delete' Mikami. maybe he will have a place in kira's organization too. You can also give L a little help. cant make light have all the fun πŸ˜… maybe give the wammy's house a time to shine. you can bring Near and mello early in the story if L's position become dire. with that you can have OC from the wammy's house, chasing kira's organization and his horseman, meanwhile L and Light working together to catch Kira. as for the name of the organization you can name it 'Novus Mundi'. since you already have that deus novi mundi in the story. or you can name it Saisei, which mean rebirth in japanese. there is a lot of option πŸ˜…

  • Riki_Abdurahim5 months ago
    Replied to ChesterCure

    no problem. Take your time πŸ‘

  • Riki_Abdurahim5 months ago
    Commented

    Good chapter πŸ˜€ Makima has enter the scene. a little sugestion. Maybe you can expand the world by giving multiple POV for important character. But not all of them per se. Maybe giving a general POV for ordinary people's reaction. what they think of kira. Supporter or not. If kira cult has formed, maybe giving them a doctrine or something. or even the inner working of the organization that kira want to build. with that, you expand the story.

  • Riki_Abdurahim5 months ago
    Replied to ChesterCure

    Good πŸ‘ Exelent start for the fic, btw.

  • Riki_Abdurahim5 months ago
    Commented

    Personally i like the mind game and wild goose chase of light and kira. i really doesnt care about the supernatural. building light an organization is also a good idea, make him more of a puppet master than the original kira. as for makima, just make a 2 person harem (misa, makima) for him and called it a day [img=recommend][img=recommend]

  • Riki_Abdurahim8 months ago
    Posted

    i stop reading when the author introduce another reincarnator. now we have a new reincarnated individual that seemingly an enemy to mc. sigh... well its good while it lasted.

  • Riki_Abdurahima year ago
    Posted

    oh boy, a stargate fanfic. i really like what you did in this story. using all of his knowledge to his advantage. its really entertaining. good job.

The Imperium of Aurelian

In the vast expanse of the Milky Way galaxy, a rich tapestry of history unfolds. It is now the year 3748 AD, and humanity has come a long way since they first ventured into the stars in 2211 AD. The early days were marked by hope and discovery as human colonies flourished on distant worlds, yet they found no evidence of alien life beyond the captivating flora and fauna of these new frontiers. The united planets once stood as the first unified human government, a beacon of cooperation and shared vision. However, rebellion and unrest shattered this unity in the year 2390, casting humanity into a state of fragmentation. In the aftermath, the Terran Alliance emerged, claiming dominion from 2390 to 2600, attempting to restore order and stability to a divided populace. With the decline of the Terran Alliance, humanity splintered further, each star system forging its own path and establishing its own form of governance. Kingdoms, federations, republics, caliphates, holy sees, and dictatorships sprouted across the galaxy, shaping distinct societies and ideologies. The once-unified knowledge and shared history began to erode, as cultures developed in isolation, leading to the forgetting of ancient histories, religions, and even whole ways of life. Curiously, amidst this vast diversity, remnants of long-lost cultures started to resurface. Languages like Latin, Classical Greek, and Classical Persian experienced a revival, as if echoes from a forgotten past. Scholars and enthusiasts dedicated themselves to reviving these ancient tongues and exploring the wisdom of bygone eras. These rediscoveries added layers of complexity to the myriad of new ways of life that had emerged, creating a captivating blend of forgotten and newly forged traditions. In this ever-evolving galaxy, independent realms soar, each with its own unique character and vision for the future. History continues to be written, forgotten knowledge yearns to be reclaimed, and humanity's journey among the stars unfolds with both echoes of the past and the boundless possibilities of the future. The story take place in the 3748 AD Follow James as he get transmigated in his sleep on the body of a rebel leader called Aurelian. watch as he embrace the role of Aurelian and building his own empire in this space opera story. ------ So this is a fanfiction story, with empire building he will build his own star empire int his story and crossover to another world and conquer them.

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