A great read, I felt like the story and the author was compelling. I think the author does character interactions very well, and the story characters aren't mythical kind of humans they don't seem like they came out of an avengers movie, they are human, relatable. My only issue is that the author does a lot of telling the characters rarely show is what's going on through the actions they exhibit. Now Im not saying its never done but that it isn't done enough making the story a bit dry at times. But overall I enjoyed the book. Keep.working hard

Why not reincarnate into the grand line, also I have a theory that devil fruits are the same as dao fruits like if you manage to achieve peak haki a devil fruit will form in your body

This is a great book, it's a little slow but it definitely has potential. I like the setup and the flow of ideas in general infact it gives me a lot of vibes from my own work. The only problem is the frequent grammatical errors but that gets better over time. I really enjoyed this one👍

This book is a great read, the story progress will probably be slow for a while but I can see a lot of detail and care put into this writing. I love how magic doesn't seem to be well known in the story, for me I think I love how they are discovering magic slowly and I hope the author can elaborate on or make an appropriate system for it. The beginning is quite tranquil but I believe it will be worth the read. Also there were a few grammatical errors but I'm not one to talk. Overall a good start

Anyway I understand why you call yourself misguided rooster

To be honest I couldn't read past the first chp not because the book isn't good but it just didn't click with me as a reader. I think the writing is good and the idea of a world inside the Bermuda triangle is quite unique and the amount of world building and history put into the first chp is great. With this as a foundation I think it can be a great find for someone else.

Mindless drones this book is just a huge rip-off of Devious first daughter even her name Ning is a rip-off it must be easy to just copy and paste add a touch of your ideas and then pretend like you are a good author. What is so sad is that many of the readers just want to read for some dumb reason like face slapping "what?" I guess now people just suck on that feel-good Kool-Aid, instead of reading proper works. Total disappointment.

I could only give this a 4.0 overall, and I loved the story and the ideas you try to implement but your story has a major flaw which is that of a perfect main character essentially you have introduced him as a someone without any clear weaknesses which is unrealistic. For example I loved how you made your character unconventional in the fact that he knows how to do many useful things abd he excels in school as well which is to be expected however you make the crucial mistake of having him also be great at sports. These are not exactly flaws but they contradict the plot especially given that he's not even 20. He knows far too much in to little time this situation is impossible. My final problem is also that you title the book as youth world however the ages proportional to adulthood in various cultures is different so how old is your oldest character? But this is just my opinion and overall I liked the story so you can take it with a grain of salt

The story has a unique plot, I will concede that it caught me completely by surprise. The transition from lighthearted scene to plunging the reader into the rabbit hole is an ingenious twist. However I did find certain aspects to be cringy

after reading the first two chapters I have to say im not sure how to take in this work. It has good structure in terms of writing, but for me the story is flat. The characters don't feel original. I feel like i read a writer's insert food wars fanfic. However I do realize that the story is in its early stages so there is a much larger room to flesh out the world and character.

The world building in this novel is key. The author does a great job of letting the reader understand and infer some of the broader things of the world. However the. major characters are poorly introduced there is little to no elaboration on the appearance of the characters leaving me to my imaginations, another problem is information we gain prematurely without any context of course this could be purposely done by the author. Overall the story is strong and has a satisfying foundation.

I still have a lot of questions from the first chapter. There is a lot of mystery here. For me the main characters growth is too fast, but perhaps the reason for this will be revealed in the future. Thank you for an exciting prospect.

For me this has been an average start and I still don't know what to expect from the novel since it is so fresh. I like how it has been structured and I hope this slow start will be a foundation for a great novel. I hope the author won't mind my shameless advice. Most dual cultivation novels don't go far as they are stuck in a quagmire of repeated r rated scenes. Please try to avoid this weakness and solidify the strength of your novel with your own colour. keep working hard!

hey we all need inspiration don't we

What can I say except intriguing. The title pulls you in by forcing you to ask questions. I like how you gave us a little foreshadowing near the end of the third chapter. What exactly is the third regression I'm on my toes🧐

This is what they mean when they talk about writing a good hook. I wasn't sure what to expect besides the cliche of a depressed lead character. But you do enough to just draw the reader in, after that anyone will want more. I read well

I feel the emotions and the weight it bears on the character. However I feel like the story is quite slow perhaps it is because you are trying to express much through the character. But that is my perspective I really like how your character ideals and personality shine through his thinking. life makes it hard for each of us to find our way and I think you're trying to be a guide.

I will try this out now thanks to your comments. However I am also here to be utterly shameless. Please read and review my book Fable Of A Hundred Seasons

Actually I am here to shamelessly promote my own work Fable Of a Humdred Seasons

you want a good read tired of all the romance but the other mainstream adventure novels are predictable. I have the perfect solution for you. read seasons: legend of the lone hawk