For me this has been an average start and I still don't know what to expect from the novel since it is so fresh. I like how it has been structured and I hope this slow start will be a foundation for a great novel. I hope the author won't mind my shameless advice. Most dual cultivation novels don't go far as they are stuck in a quagmire of repeated r rated scenes. Please try to avoid this weakness and solidify the strength of your novel with your own colour. keep working hard!
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