Petty_Official

A great read, I felt like the story and the author was compelling. I think the author does character interactions very well, and the story characters aren't mythical kind of humans they don't seem like they came out of an avengers movie, they are human, relatable. My only issue is that the author does a lot of telling the characters rarely show is what's going on through the actions they exhibit. Now Im not saying its never done but that it isn't done enough making the story a bit dry at times. But overall I enjoyed the book. Keep.working hard

Why not reincarnate into the grand line, also I have a theory that devil fruits are the same as dao fruits like if you manage to achieve peak haki a devil fruit will form in your body

This is a great book, it's a little slow but it definitely has potential. I like the setup and the flow of ideas in general infact it gives me a lot of vibes from my own work. The only problem is the frequent grammatical errors but that gets better over time. I really enjoyed this one👍

This book is a great read, the story progress will probably be slow for a while but I can see a lot of detail and care put into this writing. I love how magic doesn't seem to be well known in the story, for me I think I love how they are discovering magic slowly and I hope the author can elaborate on or make an appropriate system for it. The beginning is quite tranquil but I believe it will be worth the read. Also there were a few grammatical errors but I'm not one to talk. Overall a good start

Anyway I understand why you call yourself misguided rooster

To be honest I couldn't read past the first chp not because the book isn't good but it just didn't click with me as a reader. I think the writing is good and the idea of a world inside the Bermuda triangle is quite unique and the amount of world building and history put into the first chp is great. With this as a foundation I think it can be a great find for someone else.

Mindless drones this book is just a huge rip-off of Devious first daughter even her name Ning is a rip-off it must be easy to just copy and paste add a touch of your ideas and then pretend like you are a good author. What is so sad is that many of the readers just want to read for some dumb reason like face slapping "what?" I guess now people just suck on that feel-good Kool-Aid, instead of reading proper works. Total disappointment.

I could only give this a 4.0 overall, and I loved the story and the ideas you try to implement but your story has a major flaw which is that of a perfect main character essentially you have introduced him as a someone without any clear weaknesses which is unrealistic. For example I loved how you made your character unconventional in the fact that he knows how to do many useful things abd he excels in school as well which is to be expected however you make the crucial mistake of having him also be great at sports. These are not exactly flaws but they contradict the plot especially given that he's not even 20. He knows far too much in to little time this situation is impossible. My final problem is also that you title the book as youth world however the ages proportional to adulthood in various cultures is different so how old is your oldest character? But this is just my opinion and overall I liked the story so you can take it with a grain of salt

The story has a unique plot, I will concede that it caught me completely by surprise. The transition from lighthearted scene to plunging the reader into the rabbit hole is an ingenious twist. However I did find certain aspects to be cringy

after reading the first two chapters I have to say im not sure how to take in this work. It has good structure in terms of writing, but for me the story is flat. The characters don't feel original. I feel like i read a writer's insert food wars fanfic. However I do realize that the story is in its early stages so there is a much larger room to flesh out the world and character.