Review Detail of Petty_Official in Youth World

I could only give this a 4.0 overall, and I loved the story and the ideas you try to implement but your story has a major flaw which is that of a perfect main character essentially you have introduced him as a someone without any clear weaknesses which is unrealistic. For example I loved how you made your character unconventional in the fact that he knows how to do many useful things abd he excels in school as well which is to be expected however you make the crucial mistake of having him also be great at sports. These are not exactly flaws but they contradict the plot especially given that he's not even 20. He knows far too much in to little time this situation is impossible. My final problem is also that you title the book as youth world however the ages proportional to adulthood in various cultures is different so how old is your oldest character? But this is just my opinion and overall I liked the story so you can take it with a grain of salt