I feel the emotions and the weight it bears on the character. However I feel like the story is quite slow perhaps it is because you are trying to express much through the character. But that is my perspective I really like how your character ideals and personality shine through his thinking. life makes it hard for each of us to find our way and I think you're trying to be a guide.
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