Review Detail of Petty_Official in Vincu Oculus

This book is a great read, the story progress will probably be slow for a while but I can see a lot of detail and care put into this writing. I love how magic doesn't seem to be well known in the story, for me I think I love how they are discovering magic slowly and I hope the author can elaborate on or make an appropriate system for it. The beginning is quite tranquil but I believe it will be worth the read. Also there were a few grammatical errors but I'm not one to talk. Overall a good start