Review Detail of Petty_Official in Ode to Sorcery

The world building in this novel is key. The author does a great job of letting the reader understand and infer some of the broader things of the world. However the. major characters are poorly introduced there is little to no elaboration on the appearance of the characters leaving me to my imaginations, another problem is information we gain prematurely without any context of course this could be purposely done by the author. Overall the story is strong and has a satisfying foundation.