Liked the descriptions, man! The writing quality is good, its stability of updates is nice. Overall: A very nice read! Descriptions were lit!

I see the point of this but you could put a quotation mark there as a specification that they are calling his name. Dont get discouraged, just a simple fix :D

Quite a nice read, I must say. Writing quality is great. The stability of Updates is nice as we all know. Overall: A fine read, if ur a fan of the Vampire genre, I suggest you read this.

I see, sometimes I can't think of anything to replace "said" so i just put it there.

Hello, it's the author. I may have been inactive because I just ran out of ideas and hit writer's block. So I decided to do another fresh start with a finally planned out story. My schedule might be slow but it's for better writing quality. So things to note on: 1. I will write in Japanese-style, meaning there will be a lot of dialogue between the characters. 2. My updates might be really slow so again, I apologize. and that's it. Hope you guys stick with me until the end.

Already loved this novel! The pacing is slow but I do have a sweet spot for slow pacing as it gives us more description, plus this book is a dark fantasy too! One of my favorite types of genre. Your writing quality is quite nice, I must say. Overall: I think I'm gonna love reading this! :D

Quite a nice read! I must say, Dillon's character development is exquisite. Your writing style is very nice The character design is very good and World Background is nice but I felt like it needed more description but still, it is fine! Overall: A nice read :D

Well this is quite a long time skip lol

A fine read, in my opinion, the writing style of this novel is quite exquisite! The character design is also nice! The world background is very good. Overall, it's definitely an interesting read. I hope you have a great journey of being an author.

I knew it! I knew I was doing something wrong with the pacing. Thank you for pointing those out.

Yeah, he's a bit aware that this new world has skills due to the fact that he's basically a weeb and watched a lot of anime that covers the Isekai genre. As I said though, I will rewrite every chapter here at some point.

This novel is a nice read for me, I relate so much to the protagonist man. But your way of wording is very poetic, it feels like I'm reading a Shakespeare poem. Writing quality is so (can I swear?) fucking good. Such a nice read! Great job, author.

;-; Why is this so relatable, putting in a happy mask in front of everyone even though inside, you're crying.

This is quite a nice R-18 book, not even gonna lie. Characters are very interesting in my opinion. Your writing quality and choice of words are impeccable and incredible. Overall, a nice read. (Beware though: It's only for 18 and above ;) )

Elegant Writing Quality! I must say, Author! Your way of wording is very nice, I wish I can have that writing quality myself ;-; but anyway, overall: This is pretty good but let's see how it holds up in the future. 10/10 would recommend :D

I know I will never hit that kind of masterpiece (yes it is a masterpiece, for those who disagree, fite me). But that novel/anime inspired me or motivated me to make the novel so ye

Ah yes, the pain of updating, when you have chapters stockpiled, you can't stop the urge to publish it already but if you publish it, you will undergo a phase called "Unmotivation' but you can simply get it back if you read something that inspires you again.

LGBTQ+ books are really rare to see here, okay so before I start talking about the cons, let's talk about the pros, your story development is very nice and your stability of updates is very good, character design is nice but your writing could use some work, I love how you translated the foreign words, but, sometimes you forget to use capital letters when you start a dialogue, but I can exclude the text part at the end of chapter 1 since I think you were trying to be realistic cause that's how people text nowadays lol.

Yes and I am planning on rewriting this once I finish Arc 1, so before I advance into Arc 2, I can rewrite my chapters to make them more polished

Bravo, bravo! This caught my interest, this novel has a lot of great potentials and I'll be there to see it in the future as I now have found my favorite book! 10/10, would recommend this.