Review Detail of phoenixhyperion in *Cancelled Novel*

No complaints on the display of characters and the plot. It's done remarkably, I applaud you for that author. The writing style is refreshing to read, although I want you to add more specific details on the world background. Like in the "show don't tell" kind of thing. It would get us, readers, more engaged in your story if you add that. Aside from that, the story composition is well done and I commend you for that author! Great job.