Review Detail of Seeeeeph00 in *Cancelled Novel*

Being a fan of Re:zero I've just jacked up my expectations for this novel. But, I know that's going to be too high of a bar to reach. so I'll settle for less. and you've hit that bar nicely. the story really just rolls off the tongue or rather pages, it has a quick pace, transmigration, meeting with fem mc (?), power reveal, and battle at just the first chapter. but its not a bad thing, everything flowed really well, id just like to add a suggestion. set the scene well. one paragraph describing the area and scene really does wonders for the reader. as an author you might already have an idea of what place they were in, but a reader will have to use their imagination, adding bits and pieces of what it looks like will do wonders for the narration. anyways. good luck mate!