Review Detail of LeoAsimp_co in Empty bro

Writting- our Writting skills Could use more work though We contiue to learn and get better each day...we make a Few mistakes when writting for dialoge but we’re getting better Updating- We have a solid updating schedule which Is good we’ve been Writting for Quite sometime so we have tons of chapter’s ready to GO. Which is good cuzzz we tend to get simply unmotivated T_T Story development- it starts off slow but Not slow to the point where it gets boring...dont wanna leave any sPoilers but we went for the realistic aspect. Charecter- we have very diverse characters even the side characters are diverse. and its good that we included that It just...Gives it more flava *mwua* World- it takes place in New York..The Places that we mention are real Places nothing is made up. I believe that a few things are made up? But it probably For a good reason or done purposely *shrugs*