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Liked the descriptions, man! The writing quality is good, its stability of updates is nice. Overall: A very nice read! Descriptions were lit!

I see the point of this but you could put a quotation mark there as a specification that they are calling his name. Dont get discouraged, just a simple fix :D

Quite a nice read, I must say. Writing quality is great. The stability of Updates is nice as we all know. Overall: A fine read, if ur a fan of the Vampire genre, I suggest you read this.

I see, sometimes I can't think of anything to replace "said" so i just put it there.

Hello, it's the author. I may have been inactive because I just ran out of ideas and hit writer's block. So I decided to do another fresh start with a finally planned out story. My schedule might be slow but it's for better writing quality. So things to note on: 1. I will write in Japanese-style, meaning there will be a lot of dialogue between the characters. 2. My updates might be really slow so again, I apologize. and that's it. Hope you guys stick with me until the end.

Already loved this novel! The pacing is slow but I do have a sweet spot for slow pacing as it gives us more description, plus this book is a dark fantasy too! One of my favorite types of genre. Your writing quality is quite nice, I must say. Overall: I think I'm gonna love reading this! :D

Quite a nice read! I must say, Dillon's character development is exquisite. Your writing style is very nice The character design is very good and World Background is nice but I felt like it needed more description but still, it is fine! Overall: A nice read :D

Well this is quite a long time skip lol

A fine read, in my opinion, the writing style of this novel is quite exquisite! The character design is also nice! The world background is very good. Overall, it's definitely an interesting read. I hope you have a great journey of being an author.

I knew it! I knew I was doing something wrong with the pacing. Thank you for pointing those out.