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Unlimited Borrowing System

Author: kpthe1
Sci-fi
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Wang Wei is a young man whose family turned from rich to poor. He only has his father and his brother as his family. After many complications, he adjusted to his present life. Suddenly, one day he heard his father is dead in an accident.While he is still confused and devastated, a local kingpin pestered and tortured him about an unverified loan that his father took from him, sending Wang Wei and his brother into despair. But because of some unexpected incidents, he received a system. This is his story, where Wang Wei uses his system to exact revenge on people who caused him despair, and in this process he gets intentionally or unintentionally involved in matters that change the very structure of this world. ******************************************************* ===Info==== The book will be medium paced at the beginning, but it will pickup from chapter 18 and you'll understand the entire world background by chapter 50. Why? you ask. Because this world is too deep and complex. Mass Releases if our book reaches top in ranking or trending. Feel free to suggest in the comments section and for more discussion hop into the official Discord server. Discord: https://discord.gg/45gsgQhJQ2 This is book is taking part in the " Web novel Spirity awards 2021". Please support it. Cover Picture credit: Photo by Adam Borkowski on Unsplash

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There's so much to cover but I can't spoil it, unfortunately! At first, I thought this was another eastern novel but I was quickly surprised with how fast the story shifted. Writing Quality: Despite the writer's first language not being English, most of the scenes are described quite well. Excellent story-telling and the dialogues are quite realistic. Remember, however, that not everything in a scene needs to be revealed to the reader, like specific locations, numbers, etc. leave a bit of imagery to the reader :) Stability of Updates: Too soon to tell but they seem to be on the right track. Just keep writing every day and try to make deadlines for yourself. My goal is 3 Chapters every day before the afternoon, practice makes perfect. Story Development: If I could go 7/5 I would! As soon as they talked about the borrowing system a few chapters in all I could think about was FMA and FMA: B regarding 'Equivalent Exchange.' I thought that was one of the most interesting concepts to ever exist in anime because the MCs aren't typically overpowered as they have to be creative with what they already have. You can already tell that the MC is crafty and resourceful, so it'll be interesting to see how he uses this new system and for what. Character Design: Excellent work describing each of the characters and making them memorable, from the names to the way they act. Bravo! World Background: I could easily visualize each place they were in, imagery is imperative in fiction and it seems like you know what you're doing -- you're already a ways ahead of your competition. In conclusion, love the book so far, love the idea, and can't wait to read more! P.S. With English being my second language I can totally relate to you as I can see the minor mistakes you're making in your work (imagery, diction, and sentence-structure wise) if you'd like to talk we can exchange discords :)

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