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BlackFluteofLove

BlackFluteofLove

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Hello, guys, 馃槆 I am a new writer. I write for fun. For different content and for different experience read my unique stories馃挏馃挏

2020-07-22 JoinedIndia
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    The plot of the story seems really promising and the 'Covid' really got me hooked as it intrigued my curiosity. The riverdog seems pretty interesting and the Darkmen himself is really an interesting character. This is a good read. I would live to find out what happens further in the story. Cheers to the author! Keep writing!

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    DarkMan
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
    Replied to Zoyla_Fayyaz

    Pleasure was mine! 馃榿

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    Fated To Love You
    Contemporary RomanceZoyla Fayyaz
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    The descriptions are insane! I got goosebumps while reading. The stories are really really good and the creatures are really really creepy! I wish this collection gets the attention it definitely deserves. There are some grammatical errors and after fixing them this would really make a great novel! Kudos to the author! Keep writing, You really have the skills.

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    Short Horror Stories
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
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    This is sooo good I really can't put it down!! The author is really creative and has the perfect skills. The synopsis is not that hooking but the chapters are really really interesting. I really can't wait to find out what happens next. I've saved this and will continue reading. Kudos to the author for the perfectly crafted work!

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    Fated To Love You
    Contemporary RomanceZoyla Fayyaz
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
    Replied to WAP1884

    hehe... But be careful as Mia isn't really a baby girl 馃槤

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    Mia Isn't a baby girl
    Contemporary RomanceBlack Flute of Love
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
    Replied to WAP1884

    that's great!

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    Stuck Between Them
    Contemporary RomanceWAP1884
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
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    The way the author plays with word is just mind-blowing. When I read from the table of contents that this story has a chapter 0 I was amused but after reading it, I was grinning from ear to ear. And then the Ch 1 was just awesome. I fell in live with the way the author narrates the story. This is a commendable work. Cheers to the author! Keep writing! I really want to read more of your work.

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    Stuck Between Them
    Contemporary RomanceWAP1884
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
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    Charlie is such a d!ck. Anyhow, the story is such an amazing read I can't put it down. The title is intriguing and the synopsis is good, but it could be better. There are some grammatical errors which are okay, as the story is great. But if they are taken care of then this would be a commendable work! Great job for this amazing plot author. Cheers! Keep writing!

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    Hired
    Contemporary RomanceNeche ibe
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    I think the author has done fair enough in sketching out the characters. The synopsis gets the sympathy from the readers and will hook them in reading this. The story seems promising and the first person narrative, kinda, gives it a personal touch which is appreciable. I would like to request just one thing from the author, and that is please punctuate the paragraphs before publishing as without them the story seems to be running around. I mean, I don't like hurried things so it would be great if you could use some breathers in this. Otherwise a very fine and interesting read. Keep Writing author. Cheers to you!

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    The last leaf on the tree
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    This is completely hooking right from the synopsis. The line 'bruises under the clothes' that's really something which makes the readers to connect with the character's feelings. Although I have read just a few chapters but I already hate Mr. and Mrs. Tylor for being cruel with the MC. A great job Author! Cheers to you! Keep writing!

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    Meet Belle
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
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    A commendable job done by the author! The synopsis itself is intriguing and the prologue is just the cherry on top. The settings are so beautiful I could imagine them. The author's choice of words is quite fascinating and that really makes it a very smooth read. This is a highly recommended one. Kudos to the author! Great job! Keep writing.

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    The Forbidden Love
    Fantasy RomancePoppy Rusert
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    This is actually a very sweet read and a very good option to kill time. The characters seems pretty interesting, especially that roommate of Bless. All the names of the characters are very cute and the plot is just simply superb. A commendable job done by the author. Kudos to the author. You have the perfect storytelling skill. Keep Writing. :-)

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    Lies I Wish You Forgive
    Contemporary RomanceRahmat.R
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    The synopsis is quite intriguing and the first chapter is just amazing. I am a great fan of Supernatural- the american show, but I don't generally like works including supernatural elements. However, a few stories are really good to read and this is one of them. This actually is a fine, smooth read. I deeply enjoyed the first chapter and will surely read it further. Great job Author. Keep writing. Cheers to you!

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    Reborn For A Mission
    Contemporary RomanceIntana Meisya
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    This is an unpredictable, highly recommended one. Honestly, the title and the synopsis are intriguing.(And the fact that this is a real story with added twists is actually hooking) The first few chapters are really amazing and the relation of the MC with Dianne is really great! The author is a great storyteller. Keep up the good work author. Cheers to you!

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    S*x is You
    Contemporary RomanceSleeping Gluttony
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    The plot of this story is absolutely stunning. It can easily hook the readers. The dialogues are the perk of this story. They are raw and realistic which is commendable. I would like to suggest the author to divide the paragraphs wisely. Somewhere in the first chapter, one of the paragraphs was poorly spaced which kinda irritated me. So I would request you to edit the chapters and rest everything is top-notched. Great work. Cheers to the author.

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    The Broken Billionaire
    Contemporary RomanceTithi Sarkar
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    The setting, the characters and the plot of this book are commendable. Great work at that author! The first few chapters are a fine read and would make someone easily hooked into reading this. However, it would be better if you could use quotation marks to separate the dialogues and action. Without them, the things seem to be a bit hurried. You have what it takes author. Don't ever give up on writing. You are doing a great job! Looking forward to read more.

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    The savages of love
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    falling deeply...the tittle..tells how much love will be in this book. i just love the romance book.. and i am deeply love in this book. the characters are so so... captivating, the scene, everything.

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    Falling Deeply
    Fantasy RomancePolar Starr
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  • BlackFluteofLove
    BlackFluteofLove2mth
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    you are really a talented writer. each chapter is interesting. i just can't keep the book down. the characters are so well developed. loved the work author!!

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    Veiled Truth
    Contemporary RomanceTanY
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    The title is intriguing. The synopsis is captivating. And the first few chapters are really a good read. The author's narration is smooth and easily keeps the readers hooked. You can't just keep it down. One thing though, if you could shorten the length of the paragraphs then it would be great. Rest everything is top-notch and together this story makes it an amazing read. Cheers to the author! I have saved it and will keep reading it further.

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    The Nightmarish Reality
    Eastern FantasyDr_Awan00
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  • BlackFluteofLove
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    the book is really captivating, and well its about life. the author have have given the perfect deatailing explaining the scene and dilogues. love the book author馃挏

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