Review Detail of BlackFluteofLove in The Broken Billionaire

The plot of this story is absolutely stunning. It can easily hook the readers. The dialogues are the perk of this story. They are raw and realistic which is commendable. I would like to suggest the author to divide the paragraphs wisely. Somewhere in the first chapter, one of the paragraphs was poorly spaced which kinda irritated me. So I would request you to edit the chapters and rest everything is top-notched. Great work. Cheers to the author.