Review Detail of BlackFluteofLove in The savages of love

The setting, the characters and the plot of this book are commendable. Great work at that author! The first few chapters are a fine read and would make someone easily hooked into reading this. However, it would be better if you could use quotation marks to separate the dialogues and action. Without them, the things seem to be a bit hurried. You have what it takes author. Don't ever give up on writing. You are doing a great job! Looking forward to read more.