Review Detail of BlackFluteofLove in The last leaf on the tree

I think the author has done fair enough in sketching out the characters. The synopsis gets the sympathy from the readers and will hook them in reading this. The story seems promising and the first person narrative, kinda, gives it a personal touch which is appreciable. I would like to request just one thing from the author, and that is please punctuate the paragraphs before publishing as without them the story seems to be running around. I mean, I don't like hurried things so it would be great if you could use some breathers in this. Otherwise a very fine and interesting read. Keep Writing author. Cheers to you!