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Basso2142

Basso2142

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Just writing as a hobby

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  • Basso2142
    Basso21423mth
    Replied to Rookni

    The fast development of his team is by design but I agree I can slow it down a little bit, although it has been 100k words already and Firefly has still not evolved into Charizard. I don't want to spoil things but I have a "solution" that is not a xianxia trick to the situation, the only tip I can offer is that it's related to Leaf and will make journeying to other regions in the future something possible. I mean, every pokemon fic seems to revolve only around a single region, the journey starts with the first pokemon and ends with a cataclysmic showdown against a legendary or against one of the terrorist organizations. I want to eventually have Emmet go against everything Ash did (with some small exceptions), so the story has to allow him to have a way to travel through the world and beat each League while tackling the issues of the regions in a timely fashion. The fast growth is necessary, otherwise him facing Mewtwo and standing his ground will be even more ludicrous.

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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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  • Basso2142
    Basso21423mth
    Replied to King_Yosh

    I'm not a fan of angst but I get your point, I will strive to improve in this aspect and maybe this fic will eventually be something you like :)

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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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  • Basso2142
    Basso21423mth
    Replied to Sebastian112596

    I get your point and will take it in consideration moving forward. Him being a 15 year old with a sheltered life made him oblivious to a lot of things, I will focus more on putting him in situations that will make him mature faster, but it is hard to capture how people mature with words. All I can do is promise to improve this aspect. Hope you stick around enough to see the results :)

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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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    Basso21423mth
    Replied to qwasipoke

    Your question is totally valid. One of the most important aspects I'm trying to approach as the story develops is how exactly EM works and in which scenarios it is "triggered".I don't want to spoil much but during this first part (Kanto part of the journey) Emmet will learn a little bit about EM but won't explore it in depth for a multitude of reasons, one of them is indeed that he is a 15 year old with absolute no experience in handling pokemon at all. I hate to be cryptic but I can't seem to find a way to properly explain it to you without giving away one of EM's major weaknesses.What I can say is that when I designed EM I started with what it couldn't do, not what it could do. And so far in the story none of the "can't" have been shown.

    "Firefly!" Emmet shouted, his voice a mixture of horror and urgency. His stomach dropped as he watched her sink to her knees, grimacing in agony at the point her foe's claws connected with her stomach. Weavile stood over her, laughing menacingly, its claw raised high, ready to deliver the final blow.
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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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  • Basso2142
    Basso21423mth
    Posted

    What can I say? I find myself enjoying what I wrote even when rereading it to make sure I didn't make any mistake, so it's OK, I guess? I'm writing just for fun and practice, so I devote a reasonable time to the outline and few details of the world I'm building (upon the sometimes nonsensical one from Pokemon). What I try to do is get as close in quality to my favorite Pokemon Fanfics, Hard Enough from Viva01 and The New Normal from CartecFF. If my fic get half as good as theirs I will be pretty happy with myself. Have a great time reading Pokemon EM and any other novels!

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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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  • Basso2142
    Basso21423mth
    Replied to JoyousRebellion

    Haha it's not a cultivation novel, don't worry about it

    Gratefully, and a bit sheepishly, Emmet takes the key. "Thank you, Nurse Joy. We'll be sure to do just that," he mumbles, making a beeline toward the showers for what promises to be the most thorough cleaning session of his life.
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    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
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  • Basso2142
    Basso214211mth
    Replied to SagaLF11

    Thank you! You know, when the first person mentioned that, I thought they were just trying to scare me for fun. But after hearing the same warning for the hundredth time, I'm starting to think they're onto something lol

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    The Wizards of Ice and Fire [HIATUS]
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  • Basso2142
    Basso214211mth
    Posted

    As the author, I'm delighted to give this story a 5-star review to help kickstart its momentum. I began writing this fiction a few weeks ago purely for enjoyment, and I've recently decided to share it with you all. Please be aware that the release schedule is not yet firmly established, as my baby girl was born just 8 days ago, and we're still adjusting to our new family routine. However, things have been settling down over the past few days, and I'm confident that I can deliver at least 3 chapters per week as I work on building a substantial backlog. Thank you for your understanding and support!

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    The Wizards of Ice and Fire [HIATUS]
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  • Basso2142
    Basso214211mth
    Replied to El_Fuego

    The original story is called Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI], it is already completed in another website. i'm still not sure this version is from the same author. So far it is a complete copy and paste

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    republished*****
    Movies · Darkest_Sage
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  • Basso2142
    Basso214211mth
    Replied to Filippo_Manzone

    The original story is called Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI], it is already completed in another website. i'm still not sure this version is from the same author. So far it is a complete copy and paste

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    republished*****
    Movies · Darkest_Sage
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  • Basso2142
    Basso214211mth
    Replied to Darkest_Sage

    Your novel is a word by word copy of another one called Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI]. Are you perhaps the same author? As far as I know this story is already complete and even has a sequel.

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  • Basso2142
    Basso214211mth
    Posted

    This is a word by word recount of a fanfiction called Path of Ruin [Star Wars SI] from another famous website for fan fictions. This is not cool at all.

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    Movies · Darkest_Sage
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  • Basso2142
    Basso214211mth
    Commented

    Man I love this fic

    Ch 1 Grind
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    Overgeared: Transmigrated as a Super Named NPC but also as a Player.
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  • Basso2142
    Basso21422yr
    Commented

    Hey guys, does anyone knows any other novel with a teacher system similar to this one?

    Ch 67 Ch 66 : Meeting Kurenai once again
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    Naruto: The teacher system
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